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Snowave - Bloomingdale Snipp!!!
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| Speactra |
Snipp Snapp! :D
This sounds good, melodies are great.
Percussions needs some more variation, they're kinda repetetive as they are now...
I'm sure this turns out to a great track. |
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| Snowave |
| quote: | Originally posted by Speactra
Snipp Snapp! :D
This sounds good, melodies are great.
Percussions needs some more variation, they're kinda repetetive as they are now...
I'm sure this turns out to a great track. |
Thanks I will think about it (percs)
C ya! |
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| Nomen Nescio |
Hey mate,
I agree with the above post, the percussion in this track needs more variation. The kick is too loud first of all, and because there hardly are fx or percussional changes the melodies does not really get the attention that it could deserve.
But more importantly where is the bass in this track? I think you hid it somewhere way below underneath the track. The bass needs to glue to the kick and bassnote changes will make the build up more engaging as well.
Melodywise this reminds me of something L-Vee could do under his Lolo projectname (even though this is way faster) so that is not a bad thing ;)
Beef everything up in the build up mate, the melody is pretty sweet so that is a good first ingredient. |
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| Dj Cola |
hey there.
intro is pretty standard to me, but the sounds in the back isnt. now comes an arp. i think it comes in to fast, you need a fade in maybe or a simpler arp that plays before this.
the arp/melody is nice :). the bad thing is i think this is kinda standard but the melody totally breaks that :) |
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| Snowave |
| quote: | Originally posted by Dj Cola
hey there.
intro is pretty standard to me, but the sounds in the back isnt. now comes an arp. i think it comes in to fast, you need a fade in maybe or a simpler arp that plays before this.
the arp/melody is nice :). the bad thing is i think this is kinda standard but the melody totally breaks that :) |
The track is not suppose be somthing exta ordinary but it will appaer to be ok when its done =) But thanks for reminding me =)
Cheers Snowave! |
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