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[melodic trance] Illumin - To Know
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| Illumin |
Here's a track that I just finished working on for now....Just spun it with my records and it flowed quite well. I'd love to hear any comments and critique, as always, from anyone. Thanks!
Illumin - To Know |
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| linkmage |
Hi
I think when starts monotonic bass its relase a bit to long.Take a better look to your timbres.structure is good,but timbres must be reworked.
good sides:
I like somekind 80's touch to this track(rhytm sounds,and main melo timbre),but as I said need more work with those.
I also like,that melo is memorable.
need deeper view in you spectral analysis.
Greetz
keep going MAN :toothless
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| Illumin |
Thanks linkmage, I appreciate your thoughts and will definitely be putting some more time into this.
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| nhibberd |
Wow, many very different sounds here. Nice work on the 303's and reverses also. The only thing I have to say is that because of all the reverb going on it sounds more like someones liveset in a big hall in stead of something that would ge put out on record.
That's all.
kind regards,
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| Illumin |
I'm glad you liked it nhibberd, and thanks for the comment.
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| Eldritch |
I like this, the lead is simple but it fits the track well. A little too much reverb on the snare and clap.
While the acid bassline is very nice, it could use some variation in the pattern. I feel like there needs to be some 16th note hats to complement the off beat open hat.
Keep working on it, sounds pretty good so far. |
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| Illumin |
Thanks Eldritch for the comments, and I'm glad that you liked it. I almost forgot to check back on this. I'm actually reworking the mixdown a little, and doing some minor revisions on the sub since I've noticed it becoming somewhat overpowering on the loud system especially with it's basic kick bass kick bass pattern. I might try some variation as you had mentioned with the acidy bassline and hats as well while I'm at it. Thanks again.
Any more comments would be great....thanks! |
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