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E:mortal Black - Lost Planet
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| Akia |
The melody is nice and the piano to, but especially I like the atmosphere, just my taste! Good work!
Akia |
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| Speactra |
Hey Fredrik!
Close style to Green Bliss.
Nice piano, good melody but not really my style.
Bassline is as always really good.
Great production. Mastering sounds good on my speakers, Clean.
Not as good as Green Bliss, but thats my personal taste. ;)
Seing forward to your next productions.
Keep it up!
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| Subtle |
listening:
heavy kick you got there.. bass is nice too.. i really enjoy the open hat, the atmosphere that builds feels great, like im expecting something big.. nice strings.. very mystical atmosphere going on here, also with that piano.. everything comes in nicely after the break as well..
nice atmosphere, and original piece of music.. :) |
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| Effero |
Unusual bass, but cool and driving. Very tight production, I feel it moving in my body...that's a good sign.
I'd go with a different, more prominent snare. The synths coming in are exciting. The break offers a calming piano reminding me of some classical pieces, very good. Beutiful melodies interacting into the resolve of the break. Awesome melodic rhythm kicking in....would like to have heard more than just piano playing the melody, maybe a synth arp playing along.
The chorus ends pretty fast, a bit too fast, and goes into the acid part. I like it, sounds very organic.
I feel this was an excellent quality production, the arrangement was good but it still lacks the substance or something that would get etched in my mind and make me want to listen to it again.
Good work
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| Drik |
Thanks man :D
I'm gonna have a look at the track today and improve upon it. I'm thinking of rewriting the main part a bit and also the parts after that to make it sound more energetic. I think I slacked a bit after the main theme and just wanted it finished hehe.
Synth arp is a very good idea! |
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| Dj Cola |
this track seems good to me but the part where you bring in that "rhytmic synth" is a bit bad since you bring in the filtering so quick, i think you should play the whole melody atleast once on that since that melody was cool.
i liked your break!
the chorus on this one is really cool!
good job on this one. |
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| cybernetica |
Hey,
here we go...
interesting bass. Kick works well.
1:00 ... great groove. I'm impressed by the drive of this now.
1:30 ... awesome melody synth. :eyes:
What a great melody, I totally dig those darky minor melodies.
Now at the breakdown. Its constructed like it should be. What a nice piano, and the strings are so lovely! :eyes:
Main part now. Great stuff. Driving, epic and dark.
4:30 ... heavy acid sound. Kinda Psy-ish, which I really dig.
Now that awesome lead is coming back again.
Too bad its over so soon.
Man, what a great track! Mastering is flawless. The melodies are great. No critics from me, I LOVE it, thanks for sharing :) |
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| dj_kane |
kicking from the start. really like the drive in it. love the bass. really interesting. melodies are really nice. i love the way you create the surround in this track. lots of energy in it.
breakdown lovely pads and piano is a little creepy but works in this track. very original as stated.
really good listen mate. |
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| Derosas |
Love the rhythmic lead ins, (not sure on terminology). That release into the breakdown is sweet, sends you flying. The melody is unique, not quite my taste but I can deffinitly apreciate it.
It's good to be back at TA and good to hear that our producers are getting better and better! :toocool: |
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| Drik |
Thanks for the listen guys! :D
Man, I really need to get some time to get this track sorted hehe.
I initially thought of ditching the main melodic part in favour of something more raw and simple, but seeing the response here I'm thinking that I should do two mixes of it instead :)
Dj Cola, Im gonna look at that filtering part, it's actually quite pointless to use it so early on isn't it? :D
Cybernetica, very happy you liked it! Especially since you're such a good goa/psychadelic producer yourself! |
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| Dj Cola |
| i do think its kinda pointless that early yes, if i remember it right i got kinda pissed when the filter started so early on ;). |
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