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Joe Waters pres. ETP -- Summer Moods
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| covert23 |
| good start keep workin on it, sounds good so far...would like to hear full version....reveiew my tune digital dreams by covert23:) |
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| JoeyEnv |
| That's not really a review is it? I will review your tune but, in future, make sure you give DETAILED feedback and not just a few words. It dosen't really help. |
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| covert23 |
| more detail.....kik is weak..piano is a tad to loud.....watch your high freq range seems too much at my end.the rest is nice keep up the good work:) |
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| Subtle |
| the first synth appears a bit dry.. track seems distorting too.. the track itself sounds like the same old formula.. but i like the piano its the thing that separates it.. needs some cleaning up.. and its easier to review full lengt tracks.. good luck :) |
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| soundrush |
Hey Joey,
i realy like the style of the track. its rather a few years ago than the actual trance sound, i pretty much prefer the older sound.
plucked sound in the intro is good but needs reverb and delay. maybe a longer release would be sounding good on this one.
i like the lead that emerges at 0.40. you could maybe try to variate the melody a bit more.
or give the pad a more present and wet sound.
beat is pretty cool, clap is my favourite, very smooth to my ear.
soundwise i realy liked this one but it needs something to stant out the crowd imo. catchy lead melody or catchy pads or something like that.
good work so far, nik. |
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| dj_kane |
are you the same person i reviewed a few weeks back? lol
sounds much better mate. wasnt keen on the dj sammy thing you had going on a few weeks back. this is commercial trance but in a club sense not a cheesy way. i actually like this got my head moving. good use of the sound and a lovely piano.
one thing i dont like is the saw synth i think theres too much cut off in it. maybe reduce that and give it a cleaner sound.
would have liked to hear more to give a better review.
good luck finishing it mate! |
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| JoeyEnv |
| Thanks guys, your comments are greatly appreciated. :) |
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| RickyM |
Hey Joey
I like the bass sound in this, very cool, although I find the melody quite standard, however the piano is very nice. The sound in general is a bit muddy. Nice drive to the track, just a bit of work in the mixing.
Cheers!
Ricky |
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| Nomen Nescio |
Hey Mate,
It is quite an okay sample u got here. Nothing spectacular though because it lacks drive and depth.
A few pointers:
- The pluckish sound of the beginning of the sample is too dry. Try a bit of delay and reverb on it. The same for the little piano at the 20 sec mark.
- Melodywise this track does not do it for me, what I do like though is the "crying" synth u introduce at around 32 seconds. Lovely sound mate!
- You could make this track a lot more hardknock and driving with that crying synth being more upfront and getting a beat going that is a bit more spectacular. The mixdown of the percs is not very good at the moment. Hi hats too dominant, kick too soft.
Other than that, enjoyable listen mate. |
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| JoeyEnv |
| Thanks Nomen. That pluck is starting to annoy me as well. :whip: |
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