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Track Framework. Good?
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DJ Renekk
I have a framework (track without melody) for a track and want to hear if its good on the production side. Sounds good over here and tune ups and finishing it off with a melody synth/sub melody synth will be it. Also, would it be a good idea to add male vocals of any kind?

framework track for Poison (Original Mix) - Fiecamir (DJ Axera)
http://download.yousendit.com/7993C68C46D0B282
thoughtlessjex
This goes in the Promotion Forum, ne~.

As a general rule, vocals are a bad idea.

The kick could use a bit more punch on the low end, although later on it's fine.

There's nothing very wrong with it that I can hear. It's actually kinda nice as it is.
DJ Renekk
Well i guess the track could be cut some to fit under 10min and the melody will defintly finish it off.
Liran-A
The kick is definitly too low, but the other percussions are good built.
Which program have you worked with? Which samples pack?
nhibberd
What a good idea, to make a 'framework' as you call it. Realy gives you space to fill in details and variatons on the background. I'v learnt something, ill try it out some time.

Otherwise, nice work. The only thing i don't like is the little gritty sound once every bar half way.

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azndragon0613
Hey man, pretty nice atmospheric track here. Lots of surround sound and interesting instruments. What are you using for the background ambience? It's intense. I think though after the build, when everything kicks in, the song could use more energy (atleast I was expected it).
tranceinjection
Sounds a really nice tune with enough energy and interest to keep you listening, the kick is a little weak, but you can always put a harder kick in.
I really love the tune and it’s got a really nice atmosphere, it reminds me of DJ Sammy tune, but I cannot remember the title.
Really nice driving baseline and percussion seems ok apart from the kick, a few stabs wouldn’t go a miss and would just lift the tune a little.
Nice work
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