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A tale of a nazi
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DjConfessions
another story:
How about this one?

Dietrich is a soldier in the nazi army during world war 2. He has just enlisted have being enthralled by the persuasion of a greater empire of Germany by Hitler. His strong allegiance and ruthlessness has earned himself an officer position.
One day, a prisoner is brought before him, a platoon leader from the British army, Stephan Patterson. Dietrich's higher ranks tell him to torture Patterson for intelligence on the whereabouts of one of their own high ranking officers. They tell Dietrich to torture him, but not kill him.
Dietrich, being the animal he is, starts torturing Patterson slowly and skillfully. However, unlike the past people he has tortured, Patterson screams in a way that is audibly horrific and begs for mercy for the sake of his family and friends. Dietrich begins to feel sorry for Patterson has he cusses him out for the animals that Nazis are. Dietrich begins to look at himself and what he has become.
This realization makes Dietrich angry and after more torture, Dietrich intentionally kills Patterson out of rage. He then cuts of the tongue of patterson. When the ranking officials ask Dietrich why he killed Patterson, Dietrich says he didn't and that patterson bit his own tongue off to bleed to death to stop the torture.
His ranks tell him Patterson's defiance has earned him that his family be killed, and that Dietrich lead an undercover squad of nazis to Britian to kill his family. Dietrich doesn't want to, since he started to feel sorry for Patterson before his words enraged him to kill him. But they go.

Once in Britian, they begin to look for Patterson's family. However, upon visiting a bar, one of their squad members gets drunk and reveals their identities. They get into a fight and Dietrich is kidnapped.
Waking up, he sees the baroom filled with his squad members and men with baseball bats and knives, claiming they are going to kill him slowly for being a nazi pig. As things get underway with his squad members, Dietrich is able to break free and get away.
however, now he is a wanted nazi in enemy territory. He realizes his deep problems now. He was once known for his ruthlessness in giving pain, but just moments ago, he was in the chair about to be tortured just like Stephan Patterson. He decides to do the best thing he has done in a while. Realizing he will not be able to complete his mission, he knows the Nazi army will send another squad to kill Patterson's family. So now he changes his plans. He wants to find Patterson's family and protect them.

academy award?
ZeJayMan
That sounds awesome...
Lira
That could be an interesting film.
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