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Godavari Plant by Sergio Navarro
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| serginka |
Hello. trance track i am working on. the middle is there ill just need to work on the outro and intro a bit more. Just added a quick sand effect to levelers as well.
Godavari Plant link
any comments welcome. |
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| Majutsu |
| very nice beat. i like your kick. percs don't come through quite enough. your arps and sounds are interesting too me. you use automation and volume control nicely. i like the the voice coming in at 2:11, it relieves some of the monotony, and the automation control is again good. if a pro track is 8/10 or above, this is like 6.5. i'm not qualified to tell you how to bring it up, but it's very well done. i like the acid thing at about 4:00. very appealing to me personally. i wish i knew more technicalities to help you, but i am a trance fan, and you are really getting there. just a short distance or two. |
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| kopi_luwak |
Hi Sergio,
Interesting introduction, kick sounds fine, I would use a stronger one, or to add more compression to, personal taste only ;).
Mixdown sounds pretty good, the gated synth, choir is a nice adition.
In overall, I dont know the original, but I liked this one, at some part some synths are ear piercing, I would take care only of the highs, nice job keep it up ;).
Kopi =o. |
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| dj_kane |
started off well and i was gettin into it but after about 1:20 until the melody in the breakdown i lost interest. think you need to look at that to keep the attention of the listener.
synth around the 5:00 mark is too strong and hurt my ears. sounds like a blackboard being scrapped with finger nails. definately chnage that. sort of ruined a nice melody with that.
not a bad job on mastering etc. just rectify the above problems
good luck! |
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| Lunar Phase 7 |
The intro is almost Identical to Haylon - Starfighter!
Not bad thing by any means, I like it.
What lets this down for me is the synths.
Work on those and you could have a nice tune!
The filter envelop for the main synth isnt really working well.
It sounds like a superwave, am I correct?
You need to alter that, and make it sit a bit further back in the mix with some EQ and maybe some stereo effects like panning it a bit left and having some delay to the right, etc.
overall not bad though.
Always good to see new people produce!
Keep at it |
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| serginka |
Thanks for the input everyone. To a large popular request ill readjust the high ends of some of those synths. The Trance arp is a superwav synth. The rest are 3 oscs layers from fl and 1 sytrus.
he filter envelop for the main synth isnt really working well.
"You need to alter that, and make it sit a bit further back in the mix with some EQ and maybe some stereo effects like panning it a bit left and having some delay to the right, etc."
interesting.. never tried that. but which synts are you refering to. i am guessing those are 3osc layers i did. Give me a time when you start hearing these. |
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| Lunar Phase 7 |
They start Filtering in at like 4.30. Then you them up somthing mad wiht a phaser. and i really like that effect, but until that happens they sound really cheap.
This tune grows on you too btw, i like it more and more i listen. :) |
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| serginka |
| yeah.... once again when i listen to it in my car, most things said in tranceaddict make sense. damit.... i gotta get better speakers. listening to it in my car made me little embarassed. it was funny. ill fix it after i see family guy or maybe tomorrow. |
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| Four_On_Four-er |
LOL... I love the humble pie of listening to my mixes in the car. ;)
This is a very heavy trancer with alot of non-cheesey elements and cheesy elements thrown in with good taste.
I can't really dissagree with everyone else. I personally don't see the most of those synths as cheap -- kinda gives it a cool video game feel to them. I could play a side-scrolling shmup to this track all friggen day.
The phaser was Grade-A genius. Perfecto!
4:07... this track is a monster! I do think the highs are overdone! There's something really high-pitched that's hurting my ears a tad.
The low-pad is muddying the bass... you should fix it so that the two don't play at the same time.
AHH!! I'm not so sure I like these phaser effects at 5:00. They are effecting my ears more than the high-pitched noise was.
I loved everything else. Good job... can't wait to hear more from you. |
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| serginka |
Godavari Plant updated
i did the extended outro and intro but for some reason soundclick is not playing the last minute of the track... however. i took care of the mastering and added a little extra something in the silence. enjoy. |
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