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[Trance} Magdelayna - Our luck just ran out (original mix)
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| linkmage |
Beginning : I don't agree with that tone modulation to the main bassline.
1:32 : this synth has too much midlow freqs,try to upper midhigh,and cut low freqs.
I like those ambient bells
3:22 I like it...that is so dark...I like experimental harmony touch..thats my taste.but structure from there is'nt good...need more quadro building(I don't know if you unerstand me :) ).I think that structure is the main problem ofthis track...because it hasn't clarity...
thats only my suggestions... :)
try structure rework...
Birdie
P.S
also try to rieview my track :
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=344597
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| adam_rodriguez |
cheers linkmage for the comments - you say theres no structure in the song...do you mean build-up? cos from 3:22 i introduce new synths,percussion etc to build it up to the end and then it comes down again for the last minute...what do i need to change to make it a 'good' structure..
mind you..ive always said i dont have the normal or any structure to my songs - just my style :) |
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| richg101 |
hey mate. nice to see you back here:)
the perc that shares the intro with the kick seems a little off sync. i have noticed this with all your tracks. there is always one sound that is slightly off... once more parts are introduced the sound is much better and it works:)
pads..
this sounds good. you have a good overall sound. very nice pad melody.
break- i love your dreamy and un generic sound. this is very m.i.k.e. the sound is very un dancefloor. percs are too dreamy for it to work a dancefloor. but on a cd mix this would be much appreiciated by me. your arrangement could be better to make mixing it in a bit better transition. just follow a commercially made track. i love your synths. evrything about them is superb. so moving and emotional.
this is the type of track i can imagine on a b-side to a more dancefloor orientated track. id love this for listening to in my room while working on an essay.
well made and nice as i have come to expect mate:) |
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| adam_rodriguez |
| cheers rich...youre comments are appreciated as always! I think the percussion seems off at first because i put a delay on them..i'll try and sort them out,but as i said at the start,the song isnt finished yet,so hope to make some improvements :) |
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