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[Melodic EDM] Bridge to Nowhere by majutsu
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| Majutsu |
Here is a new song for you to check. Please review this one critically. It is very melodic EDM with trance and break elements. Definitely let me know what you think.
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| nils |
| a very interesting listen. i liked the melody, but the sound of the synth grew tiring after a while :( i'm not a fan of the distorted beats either. they (incl. the bass) felt like they were a bit distant.. as far as suggestions goes, i'd say pump in a pad and some changes in the bassline pattern. other than that, cool song! alot of new stuff and experimenting. thumbs up :) |
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| Speactra |
Nice track, very different.
That first lead is brilliant, and along the bassline it's awesome!
Nice sounding with that LFO.
The lead coming in at around 2 mins is way too loud, try to lower the volume and eq it.
The best has to be the organ, very good melody on that.
Try to make the overall sounding better, this is a great track, but it needs some more work.
Keep it up!
//Alexander |
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| Sparkunian |
Strange track.
EDM +
Don't like the intro melodie cause it's too big.I like the hihats and the way that surrounds my listening area.Bells at 2:21...maybe too loud.
After that point track it's much better for my taste.Nice cuttings,tiny spaces - beauty.
Very good level at producing.Clear and yummy.
Something different.I like your ideas.
Giorgos |
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| Dj Cola |
hey there majutsu ;).
the intro sound is weird as hell !
i dont like how you bring in the beat, it has to much elements going on.
a beat should grow onto a tune.
bass is nice. i dont like that bleepy sound, its too high.
i think you are mixing your leads too high, the bass is almost inaudible but it can be felt though.
im not a melodic guy but i like how your melodys fit together and progress.
what i dont like is how you introduce them, it becomes a bit repetetive!
i think you are improving :), keep trying dude! |
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| cybernetica |
Hey,
the first synth is way too dominant, although you got an interesting sound and a nice melody. But please make it less loud, it really pushes away everything else in the mix.
The kick feels a little muffled.
The bassline is great.
2:00 is a nice passage, the high synth in the background works well, yet its too sharp.
Wow, an organ part? Nice surprise, your stuff is original without doubt.
Overall, you have great ideas, you got some nice layering, but you should definately work on your mixing. I am really not that focused on a good mixing/mastering, but a good balance of the different elements is necessary.
Keep it up! :) |
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