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burst vein - lost 60 bars (track up now)
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| kadomony |
| yea it sucks when that happens. however, i just look at it as another chance to take the track on a different path of evolution :D |
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| kopi_luwak |
Damn, hapenned to me, and since then I always work with 3 back up copies, I usually name it foe example, GT 1, that means was the first version, then GT 2, GT 3, etc etc etc, each one wiht a GT BU (Back Up) file, so for example if after some hours, days I did not like a new section I added, I can go back to version 4, 3 2 1, etc.
Now, listening,
I personally dont like the cliping on the kick, when the synth appears it's not longer noticeable, clap is too weak though, that kinda fluty sound is too loud lol .. when appears there appears alot of high peaks, some compression may fix it, otherwise I would put down some volume on it and some effects, it was too dry, liking the synths at 2:07, the choirs are also too loud compared to the rest of the tune, it becomes annoying when you do the chord, veyr ear piercing.
At 10:00 is the bets part of the tune for sure.
In overall, it needs some work, above all balancing better each sound, I would work more on the drums, if you are going 16 minutes, a kick, snare and a clap will not help to much to get your attention the whole tunel, above all when they are kinda weak, I would chekc out the highs in some instruments, would make it a bit shorter, and would do a better structure build up, so then coudl make u get into a trance with those 16 minutes, not bad, only needs some work and some additions ;).
Kopi =o. |
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| lancton |
damn , this crash.
i'm also workin with a backup-solution. a copy will be made every 5 hours :)
well, about the track:
the drum sounds like it would be "doubled" (?) what happened there?
the lower frequencies are to weak. should be more pumpin :)
and this tune is definitely tooooo long ;-D
but i know you got a shorter version ;)
maybe you should work out the refrain again, there must be a "main-theme" :)
cheers,
olly |
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