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Forgotten Path(Trance) Finished.......(320Kbps)
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| Dj Cola |
hey there!
that effect when the kick starts is funny ^^,
the intro arp is cool.
the percs this far is nice.
the claps are almost inaudible.
i like the "cave feel" you got around 1:35 and then you morph it into normal :).
the bass is bouncy :D.
the break is cool, really nice.
i like the plucked thing you bring in there.
the break has a great atmosphere :).
the climax gets a bit repetetive :/.
i really like the piano you bring in! wasnt expected!
the second break is cool but the choir thing feels stiff.
the strings are really cool, i think the kick and pling thingy kinda runied the nice feel the strings gave.
other then that there isnt much too say, really cool track! |
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| avengie |
Thanks Cola for the Feedback:D
Where did others go? anyone? Isnt my thing good enough?
I want to make a track to send to armin to play in ASOT:( no good luck so far....:( |
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| Akia |
What an atmoshere! Love it! Dark and chill. Really like the intro and the piano. In my ears the choir sounds very good too. But I think dj Cola has right about that pling thing, it`s relly nice and everything, but don`t fit in this track. I enjoyed! :) Good job!
Akia |
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| avengie |
Thanks Akia:D For the comment.....
Well I removed the Pling sound and it only appears when the kick Starts now.... Only one place of the whole track... :D
Here is the 320Kbps Version
http://beta.yousendit.com/transfer....3AD58F2658E5562
Sounds much better in High Bitrate..... |
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| djads |
Hello there ! its sounds pretty cool, i like it ! keep up such work! wish lots of luck to become a track of you played at asot ;)
Best wishes
//Alex |
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| richg101 |
hey matey..
sounds good balance wise. percs are a lil generic but work well in creating the drive for this. nice for mixing imo.
build gets a bit repetetive.. chop it up a little imo. i like the sounds tho.
break - sounding quite emotional. maybe lower the reverb a bit. as to let the sounds be a bit more fundamental melodically..
kick back - this is quite relaxing but sounds like the track should be more energetic. id make the percs stand out more. to make it more driving.
overall i think the sound is nice but reverb is ever so slightly too much and muddys the sound a bit. bass could also be a bit more warm.
main break. - this is great. pro and well mixed. reverb works well in this bit. when kick comes back the reverb lowers drive i think.
nice work and well produced but little modifications will improve sound so much.
rich:0) |
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| avengie |
| quote: | Originally posted by richg101
hey matey..
sounds good balance wise. percs are a lil generic but work well in creating the drive for this. nice for mixing imo.
build gets a bit repetetive.. chop it up a little imo. i like the sounds tho.
break - sounding quite emotional. maybe lower the reverb a bit. as to let the sounds be a bit more fundamental melodically..
kick back - this is quite relaxing but sounds like the track should be more energetic. id make the percs stand out more. to make it more driving.
overall i think the sound is nice but reverb is ever so slightly too much and muddys the sound a bit. bass could also be a bit more warm.
main break. - this is great. pro and well mixed. reverb works well in this bit. when kick comes back the reverb lowers drive i think.
nice work and well produced but little modifications will improve sound so much.
rich:0) |
Thanks alot mate;) i will try automate the reverb a bit and put more percussion on.. will work on bass as well... im workin on another one right now tho... as soon as im done with it, i will fix this....
Cheers :D |
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| avengie |
Fixed some stuff....
Chanhed the bassline...
Added new Percussion...
Percussion is Lil Louder..
Changed the reverb a little bit..
And little little changes etc:D
Check...
Tell me How it sounds now
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.p...0016C85560FEDD1
here you go.....:D
Cheers!! |
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