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Snowave - Follow the line (Fullversion)
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| Snowave |
Hi this is my latest trance track!
I hope you might like it. Its a fullversion
Link below goes to yousendit.link. I got this in my head
from a dream i had for few days ago. I think its something still missing. But thats will be your decision to decide.
ive been planning to add a speech. Vocal with lyrics that goes like this:
Believe in tomorrow, its all about the future. Dont stay in the past,
if youdo you will loose everything between time and space.
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=7806F5B7093478F3
Believe in tomorrow!
Cheers :disbelief |
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| avengie |
Love the break man..... nice sounds.... alot of energy.... snowave sounds ha? lol i like your chillouts too... this is good but one thin. The bassline should be raised a lil bit imo.. The kick needs a little adjusting too... lol i think a little low end..
Cheers:D |
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| Speactra |
Hmm, a track from your dreams? Intresting :D
The intro is nice, the synts are wellldone.
It feels like nothing is happening between 1 and 2 mins.
The break is nice, builds up great, pretty long too, 2 mins.
You need to improve the overall sound, the kick and bass sounds to "flat". Give it some more bass.
Keep it up!
//Alexander |
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| Akia |
So dreamy, nice! I love the end, just how it feels when you`re between dreams and reality. Think it will be very nice with the lyrics in the background. :)
Får jag bara föreslå att du tar bort "if you do" från texten, så att det blir "Belive in tomorrow, its all about the furure. Dont stay in the past, you will lose everything between time and space.". Det skulle ge talet bättre flyt och göra texten mer laddad. Lycka till!
Akia |
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| Snowave |
avengie: thanx well. i did my homework i think? every production that i have made was thin earlier. but i have remastered the track. would like to have 2nd judge on the track. cheers
Speactra: same thing for you mate i would be glad with a 2nd judge on the track i will reload it.
Akia: Thanx for your comment =) Also for the advice. kept in your way. i download laso the new version =)
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.p...806F5B7093478F3
Cheers Snowave! |
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| Akia |
| Its just GREATE!!! :toocool: |
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| Snowave |
| quote: | Originally posted by Akia
Its just GREATE!!! :toocool: |
thanks (Tack) §=o) |
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| Gladius |
it's great to hear good 'ol uplifting stuff again. it won't win a prize for originality, but it's just cut-the-crap-uplifting.
great! =)
keep it up |
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| Dj Cola |
actually like the first minutes :).
acid sounds and fx's are cool :).
the synth that comes in is weird! its nice how it goes in waves :).
bassline and kick is weak, especially the bassline..
kick sounds kinda ok though..
the speach sounds like france xD.
really like the break.
really like the buildup from the break.
the saw things are cool :).
really like the rhytmic synth.
good track! |
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| thoughtlessjex |
Effects in the intro are neat.
The bass is really muffled. I barely noticed it was there until halfway through the second minute.
Arpeggiating melody is cool.
I think you may actually have too much kick. This is a problem I've been noting with my own productions. You can make the kick really loud in comparison with other instruments, and that makes it stand out, but then it can be really overpowering and out of place. I'd suggest toning your kick down a bit. |
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| avengie |
| quote: | Originally posted by Snowave
avengie: thanx well. i did my homework i think? every production that i have made was thin earlier. but i have remastered the track. would like to have 2nd judge on the track. cheers
Speactra: same thing for you mate i would be glad with a 2nd judge on the track i will reload it.
Akia: Thanx for your comment =) Also for the advice. kept in your way. i download laso the new version =)
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.p...806F5B7093478F3
Cheers Snowave! |
Link didnt work for me.... dont know why.... the download window doesnt come up...:( can you put up another link?
Cheers:D |
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| Snowave |
thoughtlessjex: thanx for the comments! well the kick is way over worked with. the kick is like a big part of the track. I 'm working on it =) Cheers
Dj Cola Hi thanx 4 the comments!
Mostly people agree on that that bass is weak but the kick way to loud. Becouose the kick is to sharp. But my sound card sux to be honest. Thats why my tracks also is weak. But i'm working on the mastering thing. cheers
Gladius: I'm glad to hear that liked tha track m8.
avengie: ok!? Worked for rest. well i will found a way i will come back about that. that must be fixed. =)Thanx for the info. Cheers |
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