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[Trance] Vizay - Proximity effect (full, 320kbps & 192kbps)
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| Vizay |
Hi
thought I'd share with you my latest work again, was a while since I last showed you guys something here but I thought you were worth it :)
As usual no labels seem to like my stuff so I might just give it away like this instead and at least some people will hopefully enjoy it :)
you can right click and choose "save as"
HERE for a 320kbps version
or
HERE for a 192kbps version
the track is a trancetrack with pretty much focus on the melodies, very dancefloor oriented I'd say...
Name: Proximity effect
Style: Trance
Length: 9.28
quality: 320kbps or 192kbps (depends on wich one you picked) :)
produced in: I'll let you guess this one and see if anyone can figure it out ;)
hope you guys enjoy it more then the labels seem to ;)
and as usual all comments are welcome, good and bad :)
cheers! |
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| Vizay |
| added a 192kbps version for the ones that don't feel like downloading the heavier 320kbps version when it comes to size (192 is about half the size) :) |
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| Akia |
Really nice melody and atmosphere in this! Love the background sound! Great job! :)
Akia |
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| Vizay |
thanks alot akia :)
been working quite alot to get the atmosphere good, for me it's not just a matter of melodies and percussion. I want to create a feeling with the track, dunno if I've succeeded with it but I guess that's from person to person :) |
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| Subtle |
hey..
i like the beginning.. nice kick and bass.. clear production.. i like the synths u have going there in the intro.. got some Orange Theme tendencies there in the break.. :)
i think the main lead is cool as hell.. and i like the way you make it more intense.. percussions arent the most interesting ive heard, although the ride is effective.. great production.. |
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| bidor |
hey, reviewing as i type..
the pads are nice and the weak kick inntroduction is well done.
i really like the pads theyre almost like voices.. cool!
Omg! 2:40 :eyespop: :eyespop: the dark lead is awesome very cool!
the main leads are really good.. the break is quite well layered too.
the snairfill at 6:20 together with the main lead is just so cool.
outro is done well. i enjoyed this track. another one im going to play till dead! thanks for sharing,
Bidor:) |
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| Vizay |
| quote: | Originally posted by Subtle
percussions arent the most interesting ive heard, although the ride is effective.. |
well I had some more intensive percussions going but that started to overcrowd the whole picture a bit. I want main focus for the listener to be on the melodies and not the percussion so I went the KISS way (keep it simple, stupid :D)
anyways thanks for the comments, really glad that you folks like the track :) |
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| staticblue |
Overall a very nice listen, It feels like you have the solid base for a great track, in terms of sound quality it's good and drive is good too. If i was to rework something, it would be some of the synths and maybe a more crispy bassline as i find it a bit bubbly right now.
I would probably also add some more interesting elements, maybe some growly low synths and a tighter buildup during the climax :) |
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| Vizay |
| hmm more crisp bassline you say, gonna work a little on it and see if I can make it sound clearer... |
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| Speactra |
I like that intro, bassline sounds very good...
Choirpad coming in sounds cheap imo.. i would make it sound more clean..
But it's kinda cool too, because it reminds me of some other track...
Hmm, can this be an old track of yours, since you're not telling when you've produced it? ;) The sound sounds kinda old imo.
Melodies are great, and the lead sounds ar welldone as well. Very clear and good sounding.
Great work and keep sharing tracks with us, it sounds good  |
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| Vizay |
| quote: | Originally posted by Speactra
But it's kinda cool too, because it reminds me of some other track...
Hmm, can this be an old track of yours, since you're not telling when |
wow that's sharp man, really sharp! :D
the choirepads are a reuse from an old track, that's basicly how it started but most parts of the track are totally new tho ;)
why I don't wanna tell what I used to produce it is basicly because I don't want people to have negative thoughts about it before they've heard it ;) (people generally bash the program and claims that nothing really proffesional can come out of it) |
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| Vizay |
have sent the track to some labels now so we'll see what happens next. If the links stop working you know what's happened ;)
Just an honest question (and I apreciate all honest answers about it, good and bad ;))
is this track something you would buy or is it to low quality productionwise?
@staticblue: I looked into the bass that you suggested but it couldn't really be worked out in a good way. When I started to fiddle with the bass sounds they took up to much space in the mix so I couldn'ät get a satisfying result out of it.
Prolly have to redo lots or whole parts of the mixingprocess in order to get it to work and right now I don't have the energy for that :p
But I apreciate your tips and suggestions and I still have them in mind :) |
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