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[Dark Trance] OrgaNik - Wolf Tracks (Full 192) (pg. 4)
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| Desty Nova |
| I like this sound a lot, good work. :) |
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| Goliath_10 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
Imagine this:
You are alone in the woods. Lost.
You try and find your way home.
You sweep the ground with your flashlight, hoping to find a path of some sort.
Instead you see something else.
You see...
Wolf Tracks
What do you do?
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Thnx so much for this one :) Looking forward to hear it :) |
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| PutBoy |
You scrared the freaks out of me with that introduction. For reelz. :crazy: Anyhow:
Master work. Driving from the absolute start. Build-up really has tension. lead at -5:50 is nice. Love that weird outlandish melody that comes in -4:54. Awesome.
Atmospheric.
Love it.
What more can I say? ;P |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| Nice one, thanks :) |
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| Omega_M |
hey dude, I was just checking ur track out. i don't produce nor am i techcnically qualified to review. I just listen to good music and comment :p
pretty good track i must say. the melodies brings out the picture of a dark night in the woods ;) and now that you mention wolfs, i can picture a couple of them on the prowl!
In my opinion, as the melody kicks in around 2:25 it needs to be a bit more strong and tense. Somehow the beats take a lot more attention than they need to.
More emphasis on melodies should make the track darker and even better  |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| ...but the point was to not have the emphasis on the melodies. |
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| Omega_M |
| what combination of musical elements makes for good dark music is pretty much subjective. i think the melody should be a bit more prominent. but if you don't think so, that's fine ;) if i were to produce this track i'd tilt the balance a bit more on the melody side. |
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| Nik Novo |
Having listened to it 2times so far, i like it very much, especially the energy in it.
I will give it a listen few times more, so that I can give you a more qualified feedback ;) |
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| jupiterone |
| Nice job man I really like the overall development of the track, only thing that doesnt really suit me is the kick but other than that its great. |
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| askspence68 |
this is a very intoxicating track if i say so myself. The sequencing is particularly appealing to me. Personally, I dont produce this type of music, but i think technically, this track is sound.
Some people said the kick is off? well.. i dunno i just disagree. the bassline could be eq'd to have more lowend to match the bass output of the kick though. its just a little lower.. actually or maybe turn the gain on the kick down a few clicks to compensate for the bass now that i think about it. lets see...
great fx usage - always a toughy for many producers.
Interesting break as well.. the track mellows, but not really at the same time - this is a cool twist.
the 4 note lead halfway through is a little i dunno overpowering and i like the sound because its original but personally i dont know if its my cup of tea as someone else put it.
regardless this is a cool groove track. i enjoyed listening to it - keep it up man.
by the way when you changed up the pad bass to variate it downward on the scale it was cool, but it caught me offguard BCUZ i didnt feel there was enough energy built up to give the idea something new was coming.. thats my one real criticism.
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| azndragon0613 |
| As usual, quality stuff for you Mr. Mystery. I like the bassline. Sounds soooo great. Nice dark, mysterious and full synths. I like it. |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| quote: | Originally posted by askspence68
this is a very intoxicating track if i say so myself. The sequencing is particularly appealing to me. Personally, I dont produce this type of music, but i think technically, this track is sound.
Some people said the kick is off? well.. i dunno i just disagree. the bassline could be eq'd to have more lowend to match the bass output of the kick though. its just a little lower.. actually or maybe turn the gain on the kick down a few clicks to compensate for the bass now that i think about it. lets see...
great fx usage - always a toughy for many producers.
Interesting break as well.. the track mellows, but not really at the same time - this is a cool twist.
the 4 note lead halfway through is a little i dunno overpowering and i like the sound because its original but personally i dont know if its my cup of tea as someone else put it.
regardless this is a cool groove track. i enjoyed listening to it - keep it up man.
by the way when you changed up the pad bass to variate it downward on the scale it was cool, but it caught me offguard BCUZ i didnt feel there was enough energy built up to give the idea something new was coming.. thats my one real criticism.
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Thanks for the detailed comments. This version that's up here is more or less a first draft. I've since tinkered with the bass and beat so they fit together better now. I've also reworked the intro a bit and added some new percussion so the bass change doesn't come in quite so sudden. |
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