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Just Started on this Happy Track - Happily Ever After ( 2.23 min Intro)
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| avengie |
Hello TA matess....
Just Started out with this lil bit ago... i was just thinkin my ass off of a tune... This was in ma head tho for quite a while but im not sure if i heard this before.... But anyway i started...
I just made a lil intro for you to check out so you can say if the idea is good or bad... so i wont stop the track from here...
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.p...6F4F97D1E24EAD8
Comments Are much appreciated... New Ideas will be awesome
Thanks in Advance!!!
Cheers:D :gsmile: |
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| Arudius |
Avengie...I like the piano sound, the choral sound, very swimming-esque. Reminds me of being under wtaer. I was very happy when the fat lead came in. I only have a few concerns:
Harmonically, going from Bb, G-, C, F ..........going to that C, the release tails of the choral really clash. I think the progression that you were going for may be with a C- instead, except I know how cliche it sounds. I think honestly that's the only thing that really tweaked my head a bit. The rest of it sounds pretty cool. Good atmosphere.
I don't know, I hope I don't sound out of line and I don't mean it in an offensive way. Anyone else share my sentiment about the C major chord? |
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| avengie |
Yeah man.... thanks....
But i wasnt going to a C- i was doing a C but i spent alot of time making that lead sound... lol alot of deleting, cutting and pasting lol but... The choral sound, it is not really on the correct key sometimes.... i have to follow my ear coz playing C in choral comes out like an F... I took that choral from Fruity loops Chorusses in The packs...:D
Thanks alot...
Cheers...:D |
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| Arudius |
Definitely bro, no schaweat! PM me with a link to your progress if you'd like sometime. I'd be honored. :)
-Arudius |
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| avengie |
others????
:( :confused: |
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| Akia |
Ha, Ha, Ha! No, you will never get patience! ;)
Its fun to hear something uplifting from you and this make me happy! (I cant give any pronounce about that C chord, my ear isnt good enogh :sadgreen: so to me, it sounds good :p ). Keep it up man!
Akia |
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