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[Trance] TvB - The Edge - 256 kbps
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| ThorVanBehrns |
Another track completed :)
I had some serious trouble coming up with a usable "second lead" for this track however, so it might be on the edge of a bit repetative.
(Sorry, but technical terms arent my strong side ^^)
Tried my best to get some variation on the lead towards the second part,
and i think it went fairly well. (I hope)
Anyways, have a listen and feel free to shoot some critics/comments back.
TvB - The Edge
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| Aquarian |
I like this more than your legacy remix. ;)
Bass could be a bit louder. I like the techy thin lead. Gets a bit repetitive though. Would be nice if you had something like an atmospheric and airy pad playing long notes in the background while the lead is playing - and in the breakdowns as well, they sound a bit empty. |
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| ThorVanBehrns |
Yeah, im scarily aware of the repetative part, but i tried over and over again to fix that, but it only made it sound worse.
But as they say, learn as you go along. (Or something along those lines) |
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| Luke Terry |
nice danceable tune, but as you say it is a bit repetitive and rather simple.
if you introduced a piano or a string or a different synth or some fx/acid it would be a lot better :)
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| ThorVanBehrns |
Hmm...just might try to save this one in and remake it. See if i can improve it. :cool:
At least i know where the flaws are now. ;) |
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| Blake Edwards |
Hi,
I Can See People Raving To This But It Just Needs A Bit More For Me. Maybe Add More Percussion To Make It More Of A Tech/Trance Record. Nice One! |
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| ThorVanBehrns |
Started working on a better version now, got some small ideas.
Will post the updated track once its done. :)
Thanks for the feedback guys :D |
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| iloop |
| Great strong intro with usual trance elements and no surprises. Nice synth/instrumentation coming in- progressing nicely. The main melody is good, but it could also use some more support from a secondary one if you keep it at 8min long. As a radio edit its enough to work with and cut down- but as an 8 min long track i do agree about the repetitiveness. Overall great sound, thanks for sharing. |
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| Desty Nova |
| I liked this one a lot, fun and upbeat :) |
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