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[Trance] Wolf Tech - Steel Spring [7:05] [remade version]
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| Mozarts ghost |
Sat down infront of my computer and had a rest...Phuuu this semester is at an end and I felt like taking the time making a new track. So in a new record breaking time I managed to come up with this bouncy track.
Enjoy or don't :D
This is the new one "steel spring"
Summer is coming.......... Mozart's ghost |
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| Chatrine |
Hi there.
Now this one is really good, infact it's great. Absolutely my kind of dreamy sound, but...
You should work the end a little bit. It's kind of abrupt he way it sounds. A bit more regression wouldn't hurt in my opinion.
8 or 9 out of 10
Keep it going.
Kisses and hugs
Chatrine |
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| Mozarts ghost |
Thanks :D
As I already told I made this one really quick, so I totally agree with you, It needs soma additional work. Not only the end but also percs and drums need some editing.
Du sommar tid nu kommer....;) MG |
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| Chatrine |
| You're absolutely right about that. (K) |
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| Lascodi |
Wow, this is absolutely a track worth something.
Starts out good, maybe a little more low on the base would make it sound more driving. Great sounding synth-atmosphere, i really like the sounds which is building up from the background and suddenly begins to play the main role. But then again the bass is a bit of handicap which starts to give a little damn in there (thinking about the sound), and also starts to sound a little false on the tone somewhere?
But a good tune for being made quickly as you say.
8/10 |
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| Mozarts ghost |
OMG!!!
Two 8 out of 10 at the same day...:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :mad: :mad:
I'llwork that bass up for you guys at the same time I'm changing the end. Hope you'll come back for a second listen when it's done...
Thanks Lascodi and Chatrine for taking the time to write some...
Your friendly Ghost of Mozart (Still waiting for the sun to appear from behind the clouds) |
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| BenLime |
The quality here is definately in the lead and pads! I like the melody, kind of reminds me of Marksun & Brian - Neno Itome, which is a good thing :)
I'd like to hear where this goes! |
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| Mozarts ghost |
I'm taking the risk to be stamped as a total no-nothing. I must confess that I haven't heard of Marksun & Brian - Neno Itome, but I will take your word and have a look-see if I can find it out there someplace...
Thanks for feedback anyhow... And be sure to get back in a few days to hear the results of my changes....
Mozarts ghost |
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| No_Boundaries |
Hi there,
Mozart, this is a very nice track. At the beginning I thought that the track was more psytrance cuz of the kicks but the bass change the whole thing. I love the leads and pads as the other guys said and I also agree that the track, not only at the end, but at the middle of the song would need more build up. I dont know, maybe a couple of extra riffs or percussion changes, just because at some point someone can find the song monotonous. Maybe kinda like flange fx or some filter work.
It's a cool song though, but those r just my opnion.
Peace... |
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| Mozarts ghost |
OK. So I made some changes to the better i think. Bassline altered and sound changed. End a bit longer and a little better. Added some variations in melodyline in the middle, but you will have to listen close to find it. Kind of the idea...:D Put tempo down 2 bpm or so...
Well I think that's it.
Ohh Link at top is changed to this new version, so go there to get it....
Mozarts ghost. |
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| Chatrine |
:eyespop: :wtf: :tongue2 :crazy:
CAN I PLEASE TAKE THIS TO ONE OF MY DJ FRIENDS???
You made changes alright, and now it's totally mindblowing. Exellent.
10/10 in my book.
Kisses Chatrine |
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| Akia |
The bass is good, great atmosphere (as usual!) I love the mystery. Dont change more now! :toocool:
Takere
Akia
P.S. Hur går det med den andra låten? D.S. |
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