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[Melodic Trance] David Michael- Blue Earth (Full 192kbps)
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| david.michael |
Would appreciate some reviews / criticism / comments on this track, to help me increase my skills for future productions. It's somewhat of a melodic trancer I suppose.
http://www.dmichael.org/Music/David..._Blue_Earth.mp3
Artist: David Michael
Title: Blue Earth
Length: 4:58
Filesize: 6.84 MB
Bitrate: 192kbps
Thanks! |
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| music2dance2 |
| hey man, nice build up at the start, Id probably add another synth in there to brighten it up or another melody maybe? I like the acid type sound in the back ground to. Good work. |
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| david.michael |
| quote: | Originally posted by music2dance2
hey man, nice build up at the start, Id probably add another synth in there to brighten it up or another melody maybe? I like the acid type sound in the back ground to. Good work. |
Thanks for the review! |
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| unsigned_club |
not bad at all.. probably could do with another underlying riff to make it brighter like a tweak of acid.
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| david.michael |
| quote: | Originally posted by unsigned_club
not bad at all.. probably could do with another underlying riff to make it brighter like a tweak of acid. |
Definitely agree. Appreciate the listen! |
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| theholyalex |
lol, i like this actually. Not so much my style so I cant really comment on the compositional aspects of it, but i really like the main lead sound and melody! I can hear some amazing remixes in my head of this too in different styles, you should try an collab with someone lol!
Cheers for the track |
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| david.michael |
| quote: | Originally posted by theholyalex
lol, i like this actually. Not so much my style so I cant really comment on the compositional aspects of it, but i really like the main lead sound and melody! I can hear some amazing remixes in my head of this too in different styles, you should try an collab with someone lol!
Cheers for the track |
I have been wanting to collab with someone for a long time, but I have still yet to do it. It would be an interesting learning experience. :)
Glad you liked it! |
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| Subtle |
listening:
nice strings, the lead is pretty cool.. nice effects.. but i feel the percussions are a bit flat, a prominent open hat would prolly do good.. other than that its pretty cool.. the lead is very catchy and the track has personality :) |
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| david.michael |
| quote: | Originally posted by Subtle
listening:
nice strings, the lead is pretty cool.. nice effects.. but i feel the percussions are a bit flat, a prominent open hat would prolly do good.. other than that its pretty cool.. the lead is very catchy and the track has personality :) |
I was thinking the same thing on the percs. Needs some more layers or something.
Thanks a lot for listening :) |
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| Firefly_pH0 |
| This track is pretty good, I like the breakdown, but I think it needs a vocal in it, or a more melodic lead. Great bassline, the main lead could do with a bit more melodic variety I think. |
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| david.michael |
| quote: | Originally posted by Firefly_pH0
This track is pretty good, I like the breakdown, but I think it needs a vocal in it, or a more melodic lead. Great bassline, the main lead could do with a bit more melodic variety I think. |
I've been wanting to do some work with vocals, but I need to get some better recording equipment first. $10 Radio Shack mic plugged into onboard sound just doesn't cut it, lol!
Thanks a lot for listening, I appreciate the review. |
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