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[Trance] Barry Kane - Mystify ::Finished track:: (pg. 2)
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| unsigned_club |
| this is really getting there. love the drop at 4:40 although the sweeper is a bit heavy. very nice kick in at 4:27 and cute stutter at 4:33. this really has the makings of a killer trance track. i'd have it on a white and play in my set. :-) |
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| bidor |
hey mate, reviewing as i listen... i find the kick a bit weak maybe try and make it more deeper.. bassline sounds a bit psy-ish but nice. the synth work sounds good but i was expecting the main part a bit more synthesized more electronic... nice track! the bassline fits well.
good work! i liked it.
Bidor:) |
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| dj_kane |
thanks for the positive review unsigned_club means alot.
bidor have to disagree on your opinion if the kick. if that kick is weak i would hate to hear a powerful kick.
thanks for the reviews! |
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| richg101 |
this is sounding very professional. beat is good but maybe a little loud? maybe not? not sure.. it could be the mid presence.
good arrangement here.
1.23 - transition sounded a little odd. im not sure why?? but somthing was missing to smooth the transition.
nice mini break. the track is grooving nicely with your percs and rolling bass. balance overall is good.
i love this main melody! really summery. i like the way you are persponing the full melody. it makes me anticipate you melody big time!
superb build on your break! just how i like em:)
beat comes back.. id have introduced the main melody differently. more of the main melody notes during the break. and then re introduce the melody slowly once the beat come back maybe.
i have also decided a note structure like this sounds more uplifting to me:)
i just played it roughly so you can hear.
click HERE!!!!!!!!
keep it up mate:) |
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| Lindo |
| Make the clap stronger so it compliments the kick better. It's kind of a background instrument at the moment. All the sounds seem more clean now. Good job. Not sure about that snare roll. Yes the bassline is changing notes!!!!!!! OOooo what a great change now. Maybe pan some instruments now so it's less in your face. OOOooo the trance pluck. Damn dude I'm really starting to like this. Hasn't lost the vibe of the old version. Same feelings. Maybe with the trance arp, move it along more of something so it's not so repetitive throughout the whole track. Meh not a fan of the snare roll for the buildup. I think something different would fit this track better. Great job with it. A few more fixed and I think you have a winner hear. Maybe a little more energy and you're good to go :D |
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| unsigned_club |
| definitely want a copy of this to play when it's fine tuned and finished!! |
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| BrenLuxor |
| quote: | Originally posted by dj_kane
thanks guys!
brenluxor check your pms! |
pms, meaning an email? because I didnt get one if thats what ye mean. :conf:
http://www.myspace.com/hybrasil |
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| dj_kane |
| top right hand corner of screen in your profile then private messages |
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| dj_kane |
thanks for the reviews rich, lindo and unsigned_club.
ill update final version when completed. ill send you a copy when finished mate. |
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| reverieX2 |
I like the begining, Nice dark and smooth
I would change up plucked string pattern with something else after a few bars and then fade it back in during your break down b/c it sounds really good there.
I absolutely love that "Sigh" sends shivers through me :)
Lastly I really like the soft synth that comes in at 4:49 but i feel like it should be more prominent. Over all great track though.
- rev |
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| High on PSI |
i liked it a lot. i cant think of anything constructive really. I would change a few things a bit myself, but that would only be adjusting it towards my own personal style, so wont mention anything.
sounds very professional too |
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