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W.I.P. Progressive-Goa; Keith O'Brien - Taiga (2:30 sample)
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| Aquarian |
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Enjoy ;)
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| Lindo |
Nice vibe and feel right now. Cool bass sound. Good choice of sounds for the atmosphere. Good stuff so far. Nice high pad sound and other pads slowly coming in. Waiting for new synth line to pop in...Breakdown starting? Nice atmosphere right now. Awww I was hoping for a cool breakdown. Fairly simple at the moment. I don't think the melody is all that strong for this type of track. Simple is good, but the note progression doesn't really flow dark like I think you're attempting. I think a stronger melody would definitely move this track along a lot more. Everything else is fantastic. If that is going to be your key breakdown then I suggest making it longer, but I just hope it isn't ;P
Good job either way. |
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| Aquarian |
| quote: | | Originally posted by Lindo I don't think the melody is all that strong for this type of track. Simple is good, but the note progression doesn't really flow dark like I think you're attempting. I think a stronger melody would definitely move this track along a lot more. |
Can you elaborate on this? Is the melody bad or do you just mean that it doesn't fit the rest? Actually, a low-key, minimal kind of melody is what I was going for, along with an 'older' style of structure for the whole track. The melody and buildup aren't supposed to be the main feature of the track like it typically would be. So it was never my intention to have a long breakdown, just something short and sweet to introduce the lead but not long enough to have a break in the rhythm.
Thanks for the feedback.:) |
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| Majutsu |
| i like the groove. nice hats. i like the technoish-bark at first, but then it grew monotonous. maybe shorten that part a tad. love the arpy break! nice fx all throughout. i like the bass at this part too, very groovy. that's really short! damn. well, i wish you'd cut the first part, and extend the break and the following groove to a whole song. thanks for sharing. was very cool. |
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| DJ Dinz |
Hi m8,
Like the groove of the percusion
It has a very dark feel... like the scary melody hehehe
cheers! |
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| Final Call |
| nice feel..yeah that melody feels scary..reminds me of something on like halloween or something :nervous: |
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| bidor |
ahoy matey:thepirate , reviewing as i listen. i like that background congo? in the beginning. ow :eek: im loving that creepy main synth at 1:45 it really has that halloween feeling. i expected it a bit more energetic a bit like uplifting... its really nice and has potential! some more creepy dark synths and pads and the track will be perfect;) im not sure if this could be called a progressive goa track.. i think its more of a minimal house/dark acid? keep up the good work boss |
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| Aquarian |
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Yes?
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| Akia |
| quote: | Originally posted by Aquarian
New sample: [[ LINK REMOVED ]]
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Yeas! I love the atmoshere in both but the melody is mutch better in the 2. Nice fx! Keep this up, man! :cool:
Akia |
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| Xenocreator_PG_ |
The congos are great. When they morph and the frequency changes of them @ 1:00 it really builds up well.
I love the reverb background noise.
The high synth @ 1:30 is an interesting change. As mentioned above does have a halloween theme feeling about it.
Sounds great to me, has lots of potential. |
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