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[Uplifting Trance]Bryant P - Love Affection (Original) 192 Kpbs Full
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| Final Call |
Hello everyone..i've just finished a uplifting melodic tune and was wondering if anyone here could give feedback. I had a few people saying it has potential..but..hey i could use more advice lol.I was going for something classic wise..with a bit of a summer feel with the piano stabs . Check it out and bad/good comments are always welcomed !
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.p...67487992A68AB15 |
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| music2dance2 |
| Sounds interesting d/l and will comment soon. |
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| optik |
intro is nicely produced; I think that the FX sounds are a little too high in the mix,
nice basslines.
I think it needs a richer pad at 1:40, it kinda sounds a little seperated; nice tho.
structure is a little strange from 2:25-2:44 - I'd cut a lot of it.
get a fatter richer pad in that breakdown - that's all it's missing.
musically good break
3:42 - is very very very ferry c1999 - like that but a lot of people will say it's very dated; screw em, it's when trance was at it's best (so far)
looses energy after about 4:30 - needs something to come in and lift it.
good track |
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| Final Call |
| ah okay..was trying to add a richer pad..but couldn't find anything suitable at the moment. |
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| davide_86 |
| excellent job mate !, this really sounds professional and has huge potential. if i may ask how did you that bassline ? its awesome! |
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| Final Call |
| ah thanks!..um i just started out with a simple bassline..and then i did a full running bassline over it if thats what you wanted to know. |
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| davide_86 |
hardware drum machine i meant or software ?
one suggestion i would put a simpler bassline in the beginning then convert to how the song actually starts, kind of use a 4/4 beat then introduce an FX effect and start the song(how it actually starts), coz how the song actually starts sounds like a CUT. |
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| Final Call |
| >.< yeah it does sound like a cut lol. It's all software =) |
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| Dipzta |
There are many bad songs out there ("even" commercials)
but this song was very good.
Cosy small lead melody, good and tight bass.
It may lacks a bit of "meat" to the song.
As Optik said, a bit Ferry @ ca 3 mins, but still cool :)
Good job =)
-Dipzta |
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| music2dance2 |
| Late reply sorry, I like the bassline its very cool. Some nice melodies and percs are good to. The clap is Ferry like to but its good. The break is great, good atmosphere and builds right. Nice effcts to. Cant fault this. Nice 1. |
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| Final Call |
| cheers!! thanks for all the comments guys =) |
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| Akia |
Really nice, the break is awesome! Think you can build it up more in the beginning thou. But I like it! Well done! :gsmile:
Akia |
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