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[Proggy] Charlie Darwin - The Temple
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| nhibberd |
Hey all!
After about 2 months of writers block I finaly managed to get a track down that's at least presentable. Hope you enjoy it! If you leave a review be sure to post a link to your own review pages so I can return the favour.
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Charlie Darwin - The Temple |
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| Eldritch |
The intro is way too long and the random percussion sounds weird.
Ok, stuff is starting to happen at 1:23.
The "singing" synth is really, really cool.
I'd like there to be something to fill out the mid-low frequencies of the track. Maybe a sidechained bass pad ontop of the existing bassline? It's a good track, but it could use improvement in the arrangement and something to fill it out more, it feels a tad empty.
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| Diginerd |
I agree with Eldritch, though I see what you were trying to do with the intro. Personally the whole mix sounds sparse, too sparse. Using space for contrast is cool, but there needs to be a payoff.
There is lots of good stuff in there though. Keep at it, it's worth it. :-) |
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