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[Trance] Magdelayna - Masquerade (192 kbps sample)
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| adam_rodriguez |
Hi guys....heres my latest tune - its more of a proggy style than my previous couple of songs but still with an uplifting melody....feedback & comments appreciated! :)
www.myspace.com/magdelayna
Adam :) |
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| Akia |
I love the energy and the uplifting melody! :) The vocal is nice but sounds familiar. Great potential, keep it up! :gsmile:
Akia |
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| adam_rodriguez |
| Cheers....the vocal is actually my mum - so dont know how it sounds familiar! :D |
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| linkmage |
clap is too reverbish :)
KICK is very nice
)ą:ėū that is really great place..
mixing is too wet..
need more work with atacks and releases on synths...
thats my opinion
Great track!
keep working on it!
:crazy:
:toothless
Birdie |
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| richg101 |
sounds great matey:)
clean and smooth. maybe a tiny bit reverberated. try lowering some of the reverb on a few of the trax.
bass and kick are nice.
overall sounds are really nice and epic as usual:)
break- loads of emotion. i can hear a nbit of mike in the progression actually. the melodies are introduced well.
beat comes back - maybe try making the main melody 1 octave higher when the kick comes back.. to highten the epic sound..?
overall i love it. i would make more cut outs of the sound so the structure has more variation.. like take the main melody away so its just the kick and bass/pads..then introduce it again slowly..etc etc etc:)
keep it up bro! |
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| adam_rodriguez |
Cheers for the comments guys...ive gone back and improved it a bit - took some muddyness out of the pads and added a bigger build up when the kick comes back in - i havnt reduced any of the reverb as i dont think its a big thing (yet)...
Rich : i tried putting the whole melody up an octave when the kick comes back in,but it didnt sound right so ive changed some bits of the melody to a higher octave - really like it when MIKE does that in his tracks...:) |
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| Akia |
| quote: | Originally posted by adam_rodriguez
Cheers....the vocal is actually my mum - so dont know how it sounds familiar! :D |
Your mum?! Cool! I know I have heard a vocal like that before but can`t remember where, maybe you have got it here in TA erlier? However, I like it! :cool:
Takere!
Akia |
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| adam_rodriguez |
| Well if you heard my ambient remake of 'Arksun - Arisen' - its very similar to the vocal in that..:) |
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| adam_rodriguez |
You can now hear the full version here :
Magdelayna Myspace
..comments appreciated :) |
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| Sunclyder |
Hello Adam :)
Not Bad, I like your track :)
Bow in my thread :)
Keep it up |
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| Akia |
Itīs great! :gsmile:
Akia |
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| DJ Patski |
Great track dude.
I love the melody and the flow, really nice.
Um, am I able to grab it anywhere or can I only listen via myspace? |
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