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| Lindo |
| a lot of highs in this mix. just a lot of random sounds it seems to me. melody wise it's not strong, but it sounds alright. I think there are a lot of sounds that are cluttering up the mix and the atmosphere isn't really there because everything is just really loud. The structure is kinda boring to me. Not really any build up. You're starting to use different cool psy sounds now. One of those sounds is ear piercing at 3:21. It just loses my interest because there's no buildup, breakdown or anything of that sort. It's just this really long mix of different melodies put together, that actually fit well, just need to use some structure to it so it all flows together nicely. You have some really nice progressions in there now around the 4 min mark on. I liked that part. Get some structure on this track and I definitely think it would sound much better. Good work. |
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| Lindo |
| well not everyone can make music and i thought you did a good job melodic wise, just production wasn't fantastic. I still enjoyed the melodic aspect though. |
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