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[Progressive] Mark Elgan - Above [320kbps] [full track]
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| Mark Elgan |
Hello everbody,
I am kinda new here, but I've been producing for almost 8 years now. I have known about this forum for a long time and it really helped me a lot during my "evolution" so i decided to join and ask for&give opinions about our music...
Here is the 160kbps samle!
--> Mark Elgan - "Above" (STREAM) (DOWNLOAD) <- new improved version!
Reviews and critics plus your opinion if i could try sending it to labels are more than welcome!
Thank you & see you around guys & girls :tongue2
UPDATE: Had to remove the 320kbps version since lables are interested in this track ;)
//Mark |
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| >>FK |
ducking for the win :)
sounds good, but the bell is waaaaay to loud, or what it is, you probably know what I mean, sometimes it completly drowns everything else, but other then that it sounds good :) |
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| Mark Elgan |
| Thanks for the comment..I'll give those bells another look...on my speakers it seems fine.. |
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| Mycron |
hey Mark,
pretty good track you got here, i really like the sidechained bassline, but i have to agree with the guy, who mentioned that the bells are too loud in the track compared to the rest of the elements, you got a nice dark atmosphere in the track, though, i think you could add a simple submelody to the track, but it's just an idea.
good work mate:) |
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| Mark Elgan |
Thank you Mycron for your review and critics. I corrected the problem with the bells being too loud so I think everything should be fine and nice to listen now!
Anyone else with comments?
//Mark |
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| Speactra |
Hey Mark!
It was a long time ago since I last saw you around :p I think it was on bittrance a year ago.. I remember your great remix of Bt's - Remember :)
I actually included it in a mix i did earlier this year, you'll find it on my website.
Well, about this track, alot of sidechaining here :p
I think the kick is missing some low end.
Lovely clear pad in the break :)
I like your percussions, but maybe the open hihat needs some eq'ing on the highest frequencies...
I concur with >>FK that your bell is abit too loud sometimes.
Good melodies, but I miss something like a big main hook, with a great melody, the current ones is kinda "small". I would like to hear one that reaches over 2 octaves... Thats just me tho :)
Great work though, you're really good and i'm seing forward to your next track :)
Keep it up!
//Alexander |
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| iloop |
| agreed with the feedback so far, i'm not that fond of the compression, a little is great but this goes a bit too far for me. regardless its great listening music, just in the background it works great. |
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| Mark Elgan |
Speactra: Heey Alexander, nice to see you again! Yeah I had this situaion and was unable to produce and visit these forums often..but now I am back :) Is Bittrance still alive?? Well I am very glad to hear that you liked my remix and will certainly give it a listen since it is always nice to hear your track in a mix :tongue2
Speactra, iloop: Yeah I know this track has a lot of sidechaining - it is supposed to have it but maybe it is a little too much i agree! I spent quite some time on this track and i think I'll leave it like it is for now..maybe some day I'll improve it...I just have so many ideas that I want to produce something new all the time :)
Thanks for the comments and see you around guys!
//Mark |
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