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[Melodic Trance] Space Garden - Star Sailor
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| Perceptive |
Hey Lars,
This is sounding really good to me, there's no question that you're defo heading in the right direction with the sound you've produced. I really like the bassline you've used and the main arp is great too. Maybe the next thing to do is to work some more on the breakdown as I think it could do with something extra. Anyway, I'm sure there are some areas that you feel need to be improved so you're probo one step ahead of me anyway!
Keep it up...
Luke :cool: |
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| dj_kane |
nice fat sound you have here. nice melodies and a good atmosphere.
only thing i would say is everything is very central i'd try and have that pad floating around the track, its too prominent at the minute.
other than that nice track mate.
keep it up! |
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| lagrom12 |
| thanks for listening :) |
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| Mycron |
probably the best track i heard from you so far:), nice melodic trancer, i like the mellow sound you brought into the track, the breakdown definitely needs some more work, though, anyway good luck with finishing the track!
look forward to hear the final version!:) |
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| lagrom12 |
thanks for listening peter
yes i will concentrate on the arrangement, break and mixing now, i tried since days to get a good sound first. i started this track from nothing and learned a lot new things, i am very excited to finish it :) |
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| DJ BERKAT |
Not exactly my style of trance but that's just beside the point.
But man did I enjoy the intro good stuff and those nice trancy synths at 1:00 + , keep it up !
DJ BERKAT |
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| Nemesis44 |
Over all it's not bad.
One of the major issues I have with it is the level of the high end melodies. They drown out the majority of the low end stuff. It's worth sorting out the levels.
In terms of overall composition this track has potential but it doesn't deliver in it's current state. There is nothing in there at this time that would give it a feel of an anthem.
It's a nice collection of sounds with nice crisp clarity. Needs to go to that next level though and actually have a payload.
Keep up the good work though.
Cheers
Nem |
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| lagrom12 |
| thanks for listening and for the feedback guys :) |
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| pho mo |
Nice soothing feel to this with the bellish sounds sitting on top and the melodies all washing over.
Love the filtering on the bass around 1:30, suits the build up nicely.
There seems to be a bit of clipping in the pads around 2:40, can hear a slight distortion there. The rest of the mix though sounds really sweet, nice full pounding bass and pretty crisp sounding high-end.
Keep up the good work ! :p |
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| Mark Elgan |
Hey man, really nice track you are getting here! Very clear sounds but I just get the feeling that they should sound better together..mabye just too spereated if you know what i mean..I'd also make the part where the main melody turns into the break more fluid!
But keep this track going and improving cos' it has potential...
//Mark |
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| lagrom12 |
wow thank you :)
seems i am on the right way or the right direction
i have some new ideas how i make the melody in the break, keep you all informed! |
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