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[Uplifting Trance] Sterilis - Eivissa (128 kbps)
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| dj_kane |
This is basically finished now. spent about 8 hours today on it so the mixing mightn't be perfect. if theres any faults let me know so i can correct them once my ears have rested.
Title: Eivissa
BPM: 138
Style: Uplifting Trance
All feedback appreciated and returned as always.
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MYSPACE |
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| Subtle |
a little Safri Duo sound you got here, but only the bongos ofcourse.. the bass is nice..
the lead melody is cool.. i like it.. but i think the bongos could be a bit more subtle in the mix. nice stuff indeed. |
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| verdonsky |
Sounded Good.
Bongos at the beginning seemed a bit loud or maybe too much of some frequency range. Love the kick a lot. Everything was cool, but the melodies I didn't find interesting. Sounded almost like Tilt - the world doesn't know, with safri duo bongos. |
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| dj_kane |
| thanks for the feedback. ill fix the volume of the bongos. |
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| bidor |
sounds very good mate, i liked the intro effects, ive to agree on that safri duo thing it sounds very similar. the break at 3:10 is nice but its a bit empty imo... maybe add some more pads or effects? dunno just a suggestion. i love that melody/synth at 3:50. the buildup is nice and the intro isnt boring at all. i find the way you introduce makes your tracks original. keep it up, hopefully youll get some released soon.
Bidor :) |
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| funkysouls |
hey..
sounds good mate...
i think there should be a little delay on bongo and also variate them as it gets too monotonus after some time.
everything llz sounds cool. ;)
good job :) |
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| Nemesis44 |
Hey there,
First up, you might want to bring the bongos down just a little.. but they do work nicely and don't smother the overall mix too much anyway. You could get creative with them and make them more of a feature in the breakdown.
The bassline is just a simple on/off solution and it would be nice if you dedicated a bit more time to introduce some more complexity to it that would give the track some more drive.
The precussion needs some more elements.
Generally speaking you have a nice and crisp mix there but it still sounds like the shell of a track that's waiting to be finished.
Good job so far though.
Cheers
Nem |
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| dj_kane |
| thanks for the imput everyone. ill upload the final version when its finished. been working on bits and pieces today, hopefully it will be finished soon. |
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| pho mo |
Really nice tune mate, the melodies and chord progression are beatiful. The arrangement works nicely and the synth sounds are really good too.
This could be a real killer of a tune if the rolling bassline was beefed up slightly, it sounds a bit soft and distant, instead of something that really drives along the song. The bongos are nice but as said a little on the dominant side.
The first bassline change up is a killer, really grabs my attention every time. The ambient fx are awesome too, they seem to tell a story.. |
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| dj_kane |
thanks for the great feedback mate. i cant seem to finish it the minute as the project maxes my cpu out. once i sort that ill put all sueggestions into it.
thanks |
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| HarryMoore |
| listing now, like all your tracks ive listened to quality, loving the way the baseline changes etc |
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| lite |
I think the bassDrum is to loud!:.. and it could need some mastering!:.
But otherwise I like it!... but cut the bongos!:. heh
And you could have the bass alittle lower!-- =) |
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