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Platoon demo - 320Kbps 3.16mins..
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| avengie |
Hey fellow TA s
I was changing my usual style a little bit... this is still unfinished but would like to give you a sneak peek at it... i met a girl and i made this track thinkin of her lol ... :D
i would like a feedback good or bad about this.... much more has to be done to finish this track... this is the middle of the track.... might change in the end depending on the feedbacks and my personal preference....
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.p...38E56B713EC1E18
enjoy TA s....:D
Cheers:tongue2 |
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| Akia |
Yeah, itīs more driving but you havenīt lost your awesome atmosphere! The melody is really nice too! Good job so far, keep it up! :gsmile:
P.S Iīm sure your girl will love it! D.S
Takere!
Akia |
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| HarryMoore |
this track is excellent.
what i dont like about it is the hi hats, they are to harsh
and needs to be a bit more punchy
appart from that its the atmosphere is excellent. |
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| avengie |
| Thanks..... I normally have my armosphere going on in all my tracks.... but i decided to change my style a little bit. Im goin to finish it soon.... and thanks for the comments again..... |
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| Mr Rogers |
really nice atmosphere with the pads, kick needs more oomph.
the overall mix sounds a little flat imo.
was waiting for the break for a new melody to break out, but nope.
really nice beat with nice flow, just doesn't seem to go anywhere.
great job :) |
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| Freesoup |
Its very flat and muffled and sounds like alot of other basic trance tunes.
You clearly have abit of knowledge when it comes to making tracks but need to apply abit more creativity. All in all I suppose it depends what you are trying to achieve.
Keep at it :) |
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| Akia |
| ...maybe you should add vocal to it to make it more interesing. |
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| avengie |
Thanks alot for other comments as well....
As i said, i just uploaded a little demo so far.... it will come out great when its done.... im really digging this to have new ideas to make this more interesting.. the intros and breakdowns are done but its not that interesting if i give the whole thing as a demo yet.... so i will complete this within two weeks and post it back....
but the comments are most welcomed as im going this.....
Cheers:D |
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