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Snowave - A life away (demo)
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| Akia |
Nice dreamy/uplifting atmosphere! I´m not really like that coputer sounding synth, it´s annoying me a bit. Otherwise, a very nice tune! Keep working! :gsmile:
Akia |
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| kopi_luwak |
Hey,
First of all I would put in the same tone the Open hat my friend :), is a bit low for the rest of the sounds imo, just a bit ;).
The sequenced synth is a bit plane for my taste, I like from 2:20, nice arpegios and that kinda pad in the background is pretty nice, I like also the muted synths.
The build up is kinda messed up, I hear the ideas and they are really cool but the build up does not take u naturally to each section imo, like all the synths/section appear without a good presentation, but that's just me ;).
In overall, nice ideas, I like pretty much the melodies, above all when the arpegios, the pads are the best, what are u using for the pads?
Keep it up ;).
Kopi =o. |
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| Snowave |
Akia: thanx for the comment. was not planne d to to have that synth so loud would just have it in the background will be fixed
cheers
kopi_luwak: Itsfar from done. so hear that to hats to low well the built is mayby strange, but i like so i may config it a little bit on that part. pads ar made of a sytrus synths. called atmosphere.
well must finish this song cheers. |
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| marcusk |
Snowave,
I like the melodies here. I'm sure this is a work in progress so I expect this to go through some more changes. But what you have so far is good. But like Akia said, that computer sounding tone does not sound too pleasant after a while. I bet you could give it a high-pass filter and Cut it down a bit, so its audible but not too loud. And I think overall you may need to lessen the treble.
Also at 3:36, I like those chords that come in. Good rhythm.
Like Kopi stated, you have some really great ideas, you just need to present them well. Build up to them.
Nice work though. |
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| DjConfessions |
| i really really like this. Sounds like good old classic Yahel. WICKED sick mate. keep up to the good work! |
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| dj_kane |
damn this is banging
one problem, it takes like 1 minute 13 seconds for anything to happen really, although this is good for mixing purposes.
lovely synth selection. what did you use to create these?
melodies are really nice.
really got my head going. nice track.
when you finish it send me a 320 kbps version so i try it in my set.
good job
keep it up |
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| Snowave |
What would it be if i did nt have you opnions.
Thanks to all of i will work ion this one really.
Cheers =) And i will get a 320kps vrsion but soon =) |
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| SuspicionVandit |
was there anymore work done to this or is that the final structure/version?
anyways, banging stuff mate. |
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