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take a listen and leave some advice!
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| ASFSE |
hey guys, here's a short clip i came up with while blazed outta my mind, as i usually am when i sit down to work on a track. anyway, just wanted to get some opinions as to what you think i could do to make it better. there is no subbass, i'll tell you that right now. the mix is cluttered, the lead too overwhelming? i dunno. EQ is tuff for me, i still don't get it. any tips appreciated!!:D :D :D
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| Affiliation |
great!
just something about a bit of clarity. I cant put my finger on it but something seems to crackle a bit too much. For a continuation I would start by slicing up the main theme loop and inserting bits of it back into the song while removing other slices. Like a beatrepeat in ableton or a drex in reason.
I like the turn it takes in the last third. |
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| ASFSE |
| ya i agree with the clarity thing, i suppose it's just a matter of seperating sounds using eq, but i need to practice that more. i will try your suggestion. |
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