| No_Boundaries |
hello there,
Just listened to your track and there r couple things that you might like to work @:
1- Musically wrong, be aware of the times my friend, usually in trance you do 8/4, 4/4, 2/4 but on the mix I noticed you sometimes went to 7/4 (impair). Musically makes no sense. :(
2- per instrument volumes (too loud against the poor kick)
3- kick: needs to be a lot more strong and drier, it sounds too WHOM and then kills the bass. :(
4- bass: sequence totally simple, with no level of difficulty nor changes. :(
5- percussions: overall needs more buildup, changes, sequences, etc... :(
6- Again music: the mix itself has no sense on the song, I mean you started as one thing and you end up on something totally different. Try keeping like the "Theme" of the song.
7- Synths: instruments itself needs more buildup cuz they sound that you take them out of the presets and you didnīt take the time to tweak them. time of the synths came into the same problem as point one, timing my friend WHATīS WRONG. you need more effects and changes, etc. etc. etc.
8- FX: No effects anywhere on the track.
9- Track limit: TOO LONG (15 minutes? wao)
There are so many other things to add but to be very sincere with you, I stopped listening to it. I am sorry but I didnīt like the track AT ALL. My suggestion is to NEVER do a mix if you are uninspired my friend, or is doing it GOOD or not DOING IT (itīs just my phylosophy) and it really doesnīt matter if itīs going to take you months or years to do it.
Sorry about all the negative feedback but we are all to help each other. Donīt get it personal tho.
Peace... |
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