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Kopi Luwak - Jamboree *Attempt to Trance* (3:00 Minutes Sample)
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| kopi_luwak |
Hello,
I have been attempting to produce Trance this last couple of months, yeah I know I sux producing Trance etc etc etc, so avoid coments like *keep producing your down tempo music* etc etc etc, because I do it for fun and dont have plans to send DEMOS at all because I know is amateur :D.
I think this would be uplifting Trance?
Anyway, here is my attempt, feedback welcome and returned as usual ;).
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Kopi =o. |
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| alanzo |
Major, eh? Whatever poppy sound that is doing the slow arp, it's kinda lame.
Percs could use some more depth... layer some more onto it.
Pad at 0:50 is cheesy as all hell.
Breakdown kinda comes from nowhere.
Spectrasonics Atmosphere much? :)
I like the synth thingy in the background at 1:35.. the soft thing
Again, the supersaw is lame and very late 90s.
The little thing at 1:55 would make for a good cut back into the percs, but it just doesn't do it becuase the track is totally lame when it comes in. No energy at all.
Basically, everything but the kick, and the square thing after the breakdown, and the portamento-type sound during the break needs to be thrown out. ;)
Try speeding it up a bit, too. |
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| Mr Rogers |
really nice kick...
i think it could do with a few more percs...
some level issues with the synths/pads.
they need to be pushed back a bit + softened.
nice pads in the break.
like'n the swoosh effects.
really nice track, great job |
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| jupiterone |
I like the cheesyness in this track in all seriousness.
Yea, def. some level issues with the pad, could use a filter on some of the frequencies.
Could use more backup with percs
1:53 - cheesey melody but i friggin love it.
For a first time in producing trance its a good shot, very moving track.
Nice job mate, continue the good work.
:)
Seb |
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| Enigmatic XTC |
| Ok. Most people will probably won't agree with me, but i think this is a pretty nice track. Obviously the pad has level issues as has been stated already. But i like the melodies and sounds for the most part. I'm still a sucker for the huge supersaws and whatnot. Anyways, especially for not producing much trance, this is nice. Good work. |
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| djads |
well, i like it, production is good thoug, even if there are some level issues. Its realy good, i like it, doesnt matter if it sounds cheezy or not, if i like it, its ok.
keep it up.
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| kopi_luwak |
Thanks for the comments guys, will check out those levels and above all the pad :D.
PS:Alan, Athmosphere? I dont use it at all, is not my kind of synth, has to much highs and is a CPU whore :D.
Kopi =o. |
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| avengie |
| For me, the breakdown is great... but more purcussion will beake it better. and the cheeziness is ok because i was like that too when i started out first... |
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| iloop |
| its a summer beach tune with trance vibes, agreed about the levels but thats an easy fix. it seems a little bit slow for me maybe up the bpm a couple #'s needs exiting intro/outro :) |
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| No_Boundaries |
Very cute track imo. some minor things that can fix the mix a little bit but not bad at all.
Buena cancion marika.
Peace... |
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| Akia |
A really nice feeling track! You should produce more trance ;)
Takere!
Akia |
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| FrancoR |
hey Kopi I liked the track, keep going :)
Quiero escuchar mas :p |
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