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John Wright – Untitled (Energetic & Melodic Trance) [192 Sample]
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| JohnWright |
Hi people
Here’s a sample of my new solo trancer which comes in at about 8 minutes long.
Click Here
I’m pretty much 100% with it now I think, but any feedback or opinions are quite welcome. Thanks for looking and listening!
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| Akia |
Sounds good, the melody is really catchy! Nice synths too! Just think the kick could make a little bit fater. Like it! :)
Akia |
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| S.R.D.R |
| Good sound ,good music..welldone:) |
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| JohnWright |
| Thanks for listening so far guys ... I'll keep on tweaking it this week ;) |
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| KilldaDJ |
yeah not bad this one, the kick and bass could do with some beefing up (thats my first impression when u label something energetic)
i feel that melodic and possibly uplifting would suit this track better.
the breakdown is huge, good work on that one, the melody could be a bit more interesting (interlaced with the bassline or something)
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| avengie |
| I like the tune.... but yeah i agree with others... you have to work on the kick little bit i guess.... but anyway, its cool...:D |
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| Stino |
| hmm feels a bit cheezy to me :( dont really like it, production wise its ok but the synths and melodies all sound a bit euro and static...dunno man |
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| JohnWright |
| Thanks for taking a listen, I'll make an updated clip soon and see how it sounds. :D |
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| DJ KaRiM NeT |
this is really nice tune .. has lotss of potential ;)
but i think you can make the kick more punchy and why don't u remove the 2 breakbeats before the break and jus play with some break beats in the break before 1:37 ? i think this will make it better :) and maybe add a sub melody playing with the lead :thepirate
anyway this is a nice tune keep it up dude ;) |
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| JohnWright |
Okay guys - Here's the new sample.
Click Here
I've adjusted the compression on some of the basses and given the main kick a new 'cleaner' sound. :) |
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| Jay M |
I hear some cracking in this sample all the time. Don't know where it's from, could be the kick? Speaking about the kick, I prefer deeper ones with more low end.. I really think this one should be beefed up more it feels so thin. Kicks make or brake a track these days.
Percussion is weak and thin, work on variety in it I'd say.
Melody and synth don't really move me either..
Although I like oldskool sounds, uplifting trance, and heavy basslines .. I think this is just not my cup of tea after all. |
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