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| advocate |
Hi guys...
I've posted a sample clip from a track im working on and I could really use your opinions and advice about it. I've generally hit a mental block with it and now I'm not sure about some parts.
Let me know what you think, I'm not sure now about the sine type lead that comes in around 15 secs and plays through.
Thanks in advance
http://download.yousendit.com/2246BE7668663C34 |
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| advocate |
| nobody willing to help? |
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| echosystm |
sounds sexual. i would change up the melody a teeny bit though, it gets a bit repetative. around 8 seconds, shift a few notes up or down, it sounds like it needs something there.
but sounds fantastic, gw ;) |
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| thecYrus |
| nice.. but the melody progression sounds a lot like a tune from mauro picott mixed with the rank1 - airwave style. |
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| Mr Rogers |
the overall mix is pretty muddy, and the melody is nicce for the first 4 seconds. then gets boring fast.
melody needs some varation.
sorry can't help more. |
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| advocate |
Thanks guys for the positive replies and the constructive critism. I agree the melody needs variation and I guess thats why it started to sound wrong, as it was getting quite repetative. Have'nt worked on the overall mix yet, just wanted to get the idea's there first. Now I have fresh ears and idea's should help.
Thanks again |
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