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Ryan - Live Your Life (Radio Edit) Full 192kbit. Vocal
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Rayan
Hello!

Well. Back to my retro 80s tune. here is the whole song! Hope you like it...

Its my first try on a genre / style as this. So be gentle!
I dont use so much vocoder now as I did on my first preview... Been thinking of giving this as a Christmas gift to my closes friends, and family. you think I could do that?

All type of feedback would be much appreciated.


Ryan - Live Your Life (Radio Edit)

Here is the lyrics for those who think its hard to hear what I sing.
LYRICS:

You have been suffering, pain from someone else.
that you nearly live your life, the way you want.

time to time, and you still dont know what your doing here.
You still dont know what your waiting for.

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places to places, you dont know what you are looking for.
you try to find the only way, to hide the fear away.

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places to places, you dont know what you are looking for.
you try to find the only way, to hide the fear away.

you are going thrue changes, that will guid you to places.
a place where you will find, your own

You have been suffering, pain from someone else.
that you nearly live your life, the way you want.

time to time, and you still dont know what your doing here.
You still dont know what your waiting for.


All the best
Ryan
Subtle
the kick isnt of the best.. bass and piano is works well.

i would advice you to work a little more on the vocals.. they sound a bit in the background.. maybe copying the vocals into 2 channels.. and pan each channel to left and right and put the right vocals playing a some milliseconds later than the other to make the vocals a little louder and clearer in the mix.

since its and 80s retro track ur making i would advice you to pump up that snare a bit.. and change the kick.

then i think it would be a nice christmas present. :)
Rayan
Thanks! Will look in to that...

Nice review btw!
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