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The Messiah Project - Love Games (320kbps 12MB) *Full track*
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| MessiahProject |
Hey guys and gals,
Please would you give my new track your attention, and possibly give me some feedback so I can start to improve - god knows ive been at it long enough!!
I honestly think this is my best track to date, dont know what catagory this falls into - (melodic trance I think)
Hope to hear from you all soon,
TMP
**THE Messiah Project - Love Games** |
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| Akia |
Love the melody, nice feeling! Good kick, but I think the vocal could be a little bit loader and imo is it overused. Otherwise, sounds it great! :)
Takere!
Akia |
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| MessiahProject |
Thanks Akia, the vocals are easily rectifiable!
Glad you like the rest of it though.
Anymore for anymore...?
TMP |
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| DJ_Eternal |
Excellent track my friend.
Crisp kick and accomodating bass line, which gives you something that immediately wants to make you dance. It certainly gets to the point very quickly.
Simple, standard chord progression with decent use of vocals. The track also sounds a little empty and the mid range needs to be filled up more, but it may have been your intention to leave it like that to give more room for the bass.
8/10 Nice track and keep up the good work :) |
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| kopi_luwak |
Hey,
Yeah kick is cool, vengeance? :P
I concur about the vocals, the tune is not bad at all, but it lacks of drive, it feels a bit monotone/programmed and becomes a bit monotone :).
Keep it up :).
Kopi =o. |
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| TomDeelay |
Your track is nice, quite good melodies, but you must work more on sounds, especially on beat and it is a little bit monotone as Kopi said, but you are going in good direction.
Greets,
Tom |
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| miszt |
Intro - Like it :-) dont like the hihats tho, but once it kiks off, nice stuff!
More like hardTrance to me, likin it...
i wont comment on the vocals, coz I'm biased about vocals :) production is nice tho, but yep need to be a bit louder, and I think a lil touch of reverb will give them a bit more space
@ 3:43 the whole mix got very clipped, not sure why, maybe a flange going hay wire? woz mostly on the bass tho..
Nice choon :) great melodies :) the sounds need a bit more space in the mix tho, bit more high-pass-filtering and a touch of eq wuld i think
my favorite bit is the break @ 4mins, like the bass going on, and the piano! yay for pianos! not enough of that in trance these days! (or woz it just over done? hehe) like it :-)
I think it needs a bit more energy, not in the melodies, just the production, it seems a bit flat, but nothing that spreading the sounds out with eq wont sort out :-D
Good stuff!
Miszt - Meltdown |
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| MessiahProject |
| quote: | Originally posted by miszt
the sounds need a bit more space in the mix tho, bit more high-pass-filtering and a touch of eq wuld i think
- I think it needs a bit more energy, not in the melodies, just the production, it seems a bit flat, but nothing that spreading the sounds out with eq wont sort out :-D
Miszt - Meltdown |
Thanks everyone for your comments
Miszt - glad you like the overall track - could you explain more about the 'space' aspect?, and how to spread the sounds with eq etc?
(Im a bit of a noob when it comes to things like that! - until someone educates me!) |
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| miszt |
its impossible to describe really in a quick post, but I'll try n give you an idea....
either using a SpecAnalyser, or by sweeping in an eq, find the main freqs for each instrument, take out the freqs that you dont need for that instrument to sound good (eg main Lead might work in the 500-1500 band mostly, so you can reduce everything else...watch out for other peaks that might 'make' the sound tho, you'll need to keep them in), do that for all of them, and you'll instantly spread the sounds out in there own freq bands, you dont need to take them out completly, use ur ears to find the best sound.
if 2 instruments are working the same band, then you can use a bit of reverb on one of them to bring the sounds out
:-)
I'm a noobie aswell, but i got good teachers hehe :-D |
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