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Rinster - Speedy Ways (Full-320Kbps)
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| Bidor |
hey guys, hows it going?
havent posted a new tune in a while..
have been busy making this new one,
Title : Speedy Ways
Genre : Trance/House
Kbps : 320
File Size : 11Mb
Length : 4:48
hope you all enjoy the tune just as much as me making it.
all reviews are really appreciated and are 100% returned.
enjoy.:)
Speedyshare.com (Download link below)
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Thanks!
Bidor:) |
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| Enigmatic XTC |
Hey. Listening as i go.
What is that low rumbling sound? It sounds like a motorcycle idling in the background.
I like the "reverse" crash at 0:29. Its nice to hear a real cymbal roll.
Bring the bass down a little. And put a little more low end into it.
Neat little arp in the background at 1:16
I like the kick but bring it out a tiny tiny bit.
Bass fits better now but could still use to come down just a tad.
Nice main synth at 1:51.
Melody gets a little garbled sometimes. Maybe double it an octave higher, but have the high octave playing softly so it just gives definition and doesnt stand out.
More kick in the break 3:00. I can barely hear it. Not a lot more, just a little.
Nothing important after that.
Overall, i like this. It has a nice atmosphere. Definitely bring the bass down in the beginning. Once the main lead comes in it fits well, but before that its too loud. Also, i'm not a big fan of the keyboardish pad. Thats just a matter of taste though. I like the sound, just not the attack.
Anyways, nice work. |
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| Bidor |
| quote: | Originally posted by Enigmatic XTC
Hey. Listening as i go.
What is that low rumbling sound? It sounds like a motorcycle idling in the background.
I like the "reverse" crash at 0:29. Its nice to hear a real cymbal roll.
Bring the bass down a little. And put a little more low end into it.
Neat little arp in the background at 1:16
I like the kick but bring it out a tiny tiny bit.
Bass fits better now but could still use to come down just a tad.
Nice main synth at 1:51.
Melody gets a little garbled sometimes. Maybe double it an octave higher, but have the high octave playing softly so it just gives definition and doesnt stand out.
More kick in the break 3:00. I can barely hear it. Not a lot more, just a little.
Nothing important after that.
Overall, i like this. It has a nice atmosphere. Definitely bring the bass down in the beginning. Once the main lead comes in it fits well, but before that its too loud. Also, i'm not a big fan of the keyboardish pad. Thats just a matter of taste though. I like the sound, just not the attack.
Anyways, nice work. |
thanks for the feedback mate. its really helpfull! :)
i agree about the bassline that its a lil to loud in the beginning, im gonna change that as soon i get more feedback on what to change. im not sure what you meant about the melody being "garbled":conf: also the kick at 3:00 that you mentioned.. you cant hear it? :wtf: its there.. :p
glad you liked the song though.;)
feedback is returned as promised!
thanks again.
Bidor:) |
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| Enigmatic XTC |
| quote: | Originally posted by Bidor
thanks for the feedback mate. its really helpfull! :)
i agree about the bassline that its a lil to loud in the beginning, im gonna change that as soon i get more feedback on what to change. im not sure what you meant about the melody being "garbled":conf: also the kick at 3:00 that you mentioned.. you cant hear it? :wtf: its there.. :p
glad you liked the song though.;)
feedback is returned as promised!
thanks again.
Bidor:) |
With the melody being garbled i mean that because of the low octave its in, it gets mixed in with some of the other midrange frequencys. That and the kick may just be because i was listening on headphones. I dont know. |
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| Bidor |
| quote: | Originally posted by Enigmatic XTC
With the melody being garbled i mean that because of the low octave its in, it gets mixed in with some of the other midrange frequencys. That and the kick may just be because i was listening on headphones. I dont know. |
i made the tune with my headphones.. i think maybe thats why the melody is like that. but ill try and fix it. :) |
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| Mozarts ghost |
Been listening a couple of turns but must be honest and tell you that it didn't quite do it for me. In my taste it is a bit dry and, how shall I put it, "arcade game like".
As a production it has some flaws that needs fixing. As I agree on the remarks made by Enigmatic XTC to about 99% I fell it isn't to anyones advantage to write them down again... :)
Hope you don't give up because of my add... Trust me there will be others that don't share my taste and will love it(and that's the beauty with music and art), so keep it up...
MG |
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| Akia |
Nice and uplifting melody :) ! Maybe it would sounds better in a higher octav, as the other said. But itīs a really nice feeling tune, so keep it up!
Akia |
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| avengie |
Hey..... one thing i noticed in the beggining thats the same chord progression as out the water :D isnt it? its little bit dry but you can try more.... kinda like me about a year ago hehe ;) its not bad... have to work more i guess:p
Cheers:cool: |
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| Bidor |
| quote: | Originally posted by Mozarts ghost
Been listening a couple of turns but must be honest and tell you that it didn't quite do it for me. In my taste it is a bit dry and, how shall I put it, "arcade game like".
As a production it has some flaws that needs fixing. As I agree on the remarks made by Enigmatic XTC to about 99% I fell it isn't to anyones advantage to write them down again... :)
Hope you don't give up because of my add... Trust me there will be others that don't share my taste and will love it(and that's the beauty with music and art), so keep it up...
MG |
i appreciate your honest post! ofcourse i wont give up!;)
| quote: | Originally posted by Akia
Nice and uplifting melody :) ! Maybe it would sounds better in a higher octav, as the other said. But itīs a really nice feeling tune, so keep it up!
Akia |
thanks Akia! you make me happy!
| quote: | Originally posted by avengie
Hey..... one thing i noticed in the beggining thats the same chord progression as out the water :D isnt it? its little bit dry but you can try more.... kinda like me about a year ago hehe ;) its not bad... have to work more i guess:p
Cheers:cool: |
hey mate! yeah its the same chord. good ears!;) glad you liked it. thanks for the feedback! :)
Bidor:) |
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| theholyalex |
im like the idea in the tune, but it doesn't seem to build or go anywhere so it gets a little repetitive
keep up the gd work! |
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| Illumin |
agree w/ all that's been said already.....but i like the overall style....
perhaps consider adding a light delay to your bassline to help smoothen it out flow-wise. Also sounds like your main lead synth is panned to the left a little, needs to be adjusted. also, i think you should replace your clap or rim hit, whatever it is, with a different sample....too bouncy for me, and add a light reverb to it so it sits better.
hope this helps.....good stuff! |
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| Takkra |
oh god.. this is soo happy :p
I don't know if it was your intention, but the synths sound really, really cheezy.. I can imagine it was aLOT of fun making it hehe.
the bass is too loud!
youve got nice percussions!
nice deep kick :)!
the break synth sound a lot less "plastic". nice!
the breakbeat break is nice :)
you've got nice chords :)
around the 4 minutes the melody starts to get too repetitive..
(personal taste ;))
but the track would a nice "fout nummer" to throw into a set though ;) it could be made even more "fout" with an untiss bass hehe :P |
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