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[work in progress - need advice] Rise to the Cause [320 kbps]
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| David Adams |
Can you guys take a listen and let me know what you think? I know this is the best place for honesty. I'm at a point with this song (like all my others) where I'm not sure where to take it. Some professional advice would be greatly appreciated. It's not yet finished and it hasn't been properly mixed. I'm looking for advice on the structure. Should I try to get some vocals for this? Do you like the structure of the song thus far? Anything you would change? Any advice will only help me to get better.
Here is the link:
Rise to the Cause - Draft - Version 8.mp3
Regards,
Adam |
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| djsphere |
| soundwise it's really good, but the melody doesen't do it for me |
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| David Adams |
| quote: | Originally posted by djsphere
soundwise it's really good, but the melody doesen't do it for me |
Thanks for listening!
Just so I know what you are referring to, when you are talking about melody, are you referring to the lead synth at the end? If so, I agree. I no longer like it either. Or, are you talking about the chord progression of the pads? |
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