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Alex Chilcott - Hemera (uplifting trance, 192kbps full)
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| theholyalex |
Hey, guys, started work on a new track, it's a day or so old, really like how it's turning out, i think the mix just needs a few tweaks, not exactly sure though, i don't have any expensive monitors, so if anyone could let me know what it sounds like that'd be handy.
comments/crits appreciated!
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cheers, Alex |
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| KilldaDJ |
upload it to speedyshare.com
i cant be arsed to wait 0.6 minutes and enter some stupid code to download and review tracks. :gsmile: |
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| theholyalex |
Lol, done and done! Cheers, i swear every time i come back from uni the upload site of choice has changed :P
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| DJ_Eternal |
Commenting as i listen...
Driving start... nice kick and rolling bass, basic percs to keep it that way.
Becomes a little bland as it remains the same for around 2 minutes without much progression. The bass dominates the frequency spectrum too much, and although it fills up the low-mids, theres not much variation to keep the listener interested.
I'd take some of the mid's in the bass out and put some secondary melody, pads, strings etc in to make the listener want more.
Useable melody, catchy, can't fault it all really.
I'd spruce up the track with some more loops, FX and percs to vary it slightly.
Each phrase within the track tends to drag on caused by lack of variation.
Good effort all in all, but work on that imagination to keep it interesting :)
6.5/10 for me |
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| IrisDeeJay |
Whow, Alex! I've just listened to Hemera and it's superb!:D I have no bad critic. I love the main melody and its sound...well, all sounds are perfect.
I'll download the other tune you have now and take a listen. ;)
Congratulations and, please, keep up your great work!  |
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| NorthStar |
Intro is very long.. the Amount of Delays and Relase of the Bassline you used is much, you can use lower EQ effect Bass Line.
Moreover, you could catch the Happy mode in the song |
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| Akia |
Sounds nice, really catchy and uplifting! Awesome break! But I think something is missing... maybe it needs a change, been a bit repetitive after a while. But I like it, good job! :)
Takere!
Akia |
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| Eldritch |
Hi there. You've got some very nice and uplifting melodies. Maybe a bit on the cheesy side, but that's just my personal taste.
While the track is very good musically it lacks alot in production quality. The levels sound wrong. The kick is too weak and the different elements blend together too much and cause the track to become muddy. You could use EQ to separate the different elements of the track (As always with EQ, don't overdo it!). Also some of the synths sound a little dry, use delay and reverb to give the track more atmosphere. |
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