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[Trance] Sterilis - The Beginning 128kbps *FULL TRACK*
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| dj_kane |
Name: The Beginning
BPM: 138
Style: Uplifting/Melodic
Been working at this the past few days, so while i take a break from producing some feedback would be nice.
Any comments would help and feedback is returned!
thanks
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| Bidor |
just listened to this.. sounds good! i like the intro. the breakdown is a little to long imo. i like the main melody to. maybe turn up the bass a little bit.. the tune has more high frequencies then low once to keep it in balance. anyway i enjoyed it. and certainly is a keeper!.
Bidor:) |
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| Akia |
I like this! Really nice feeling! Think it could need a little bit more energy but otherwise, awesome! :)
Takere!
Akia |
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| dj_kane |
thanks for the reviews guys. i really appreciate it.
bit disappointed that theres 26 downloads and only 2 replies though :( |
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| verdonsky |
Very interesting sounds.
You have a nice kick. How did you make it so slappy/punchy in the upper mids/ low highs?
I really liked the part after 5:20 the most
nice |
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| dj_kane |
| thanks for the feedback mate |
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| MrJiveBoJingles |
This is nice. I could see this being played in a club if you fixed a few things:
(1) It sounds like the bass is just an "oompa oompa." If you beefed it up a little or let some of its higher frequencies in or varied it more it could add some energy to the track.
(2) The strings that you have playing really get lost in the mix when everything is going at once. It might be better if you used them just in the breakdowns. That would make their appearance have a more dramatic effect as well. Maybe try playing them an octave higher, too? |
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| RickyM |
Hey Barry
Nice thumping track you got here, though I think that everything seems very 'close' if you know what I mean, there isn't much room for everything. Not sure if thats down to the mixing or over compression.
I liked the melody, although a little hard to follow. I think if you work more on your sounds this could become a better track, it's too muddy at the minute. |
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