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need help with essay.... (pg. 2)
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| Omega_Blue |
| i don't see how you can fail this essay when it asks a speculative question based on your opinion. i say bull it. ..are you supposed to persuade your teacher or something? |
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| Marc Summers |
| quote: | Originally posted by PvDoBseSSioN
all this has to relate to astronomy tho |
, then that should be easy for ya, that's written down in textbooks. |
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| Yan |
| Don't be too general. |
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| PvDoBseSSioN |
| quote: | Originally posted by Omega_Blue
i don't see how you can fail this essay when it asks a speculative question based on your opinion. i say bull it. ..are you supposed to persuade your teacher or something? |
not really, well im gonna bs alot of it but its an astronomy class so its gotta be somewhat educated and relate to astronomy
| quote: | Originally posted by Yan
Don't be too general. |
yeah i know that's my problem |
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| TheWhiteQueen |
| quote: | Originally posted by Marc Summers
Life, to me is a journey that we all take in order to improve ourselves in a number of ways. Some people make financial progression the most important priority in life. Others go about life in a more self-conscious way, attempting to become selfless and as helpful as they can be. |
So explain to me this:
What does Tony Danza wearing my hair and clothing have to do with your journey towards improving yourself?
Life's not about improvement, it's about gratification. The progress we try to make only serves to eventually turn into something that pleases us. |
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| astroboy |
| quote: | Originally posted by PvDoBseSSioN
i think im gonna start with something like this...
I see life as everything known to man, from people and animals, to everything existing in the universe. |
Uuum i think they'd want something by way of differentiating living things such as animals, plants and microbes from non-living things like these rocks:
| quote: | | Everything started from something |
Meaning?
| quote: | and I think that for something to be living, it does not require having a heartbeat, life is everywhere.
(rough draft kinda thing) |
I doubt there's any life on Jupiter, or the surface of the Sun. |
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| PvDoBseSSioN |
like i said, quick thought that i just wrote down, im still trying to come up with some good thoughts and material
it has to relate to the whole entire universe
BTW thanks for the help guys :) |
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| Omega_Blue |
| quote: | Originally posted by PvDoBseSSioN
not really, well im gonna bs alot of it but its an astronomy class so its gotta be somewhat educated and relate to astronomy
yeah i know that's my problem |
ah, didn't read the astronomy part. can't help you on that one.
| quote: | Originally posted by TheWhiteQueen
So explain to me this:
What does Tony Danza wearing my hair and clothing have to do with your journey towards improving yourself?
Life's not about improvement, it's about gratification. The progress we try to make only serves to eventually turn into something that pleases us. |
that's a very egoist interpretation on life. i agree though. |
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| Marc Summers |
| quote: | Originally posted by astroboy
Uuum i think they'd want something by way of differentiating living things such as animals, plants and microbes from non-living things like these rocks:
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there are elements in those rocks that are in your body.
think about it. |
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| Yan |
| quote: | Originally posted by astroboy
I doubt there's any life on Jupiter, or the surface of the Sun. |
LIAR.
I know plenty of Sun people.
They wave to me when I look up at the sky. It's a happy time.
:insert funny non-planet Pluto joke here:: |
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| PvDoBseSSioN |
| quote: | Originally posted by Yan
:insert funny non-planet Pluto joke here:: |
planeth4x? |
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| TheWhiteQueen |
| Actually the rock thing's a good point. Maybe you could talk about you inability to identify just exactly what makes a rock's "life" different from a plants, or for that matter an animals. Maybe this could conern you? Prof.s love when you're concerned. |
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