| MrJiveBoJingles |
The sound that comes in around 1:34: I think it would work better if you brought it in more gradually. When the track reaches about two minutes or so, it kind of sounds like something is clipping. I'm not sure if it's actually clipping, but when everything plays at once it sounds like some distortion or something nasty is going on. It also sounds too "busy" in parts, like you have too many instruments occupying the same frequency range or something (not sure if that's what it is).
Interesting work, though. |
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