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| daverodger |
oi there
this is something i threw together yesterday while at the studio. far from finished...lemme know how it sounds. this is my first trance/techno/electronica production EVER.
http://myspace.com/starscandalelectric |
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| daverodger |
| is it working?? i cant get the song to play on my comp anymore...fuggen myspace |
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| HarryMoore |
listening now!
good use of the deep pads, and nice percussion, vocal sounds cool if not a little quiet. the riff coming in sounds lush, i personally would beef it up a touch. not bad at all
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ps check out my track and voice your opinion on it please: http://tranceaddict.com/forums/show...0&forumid=74&s= |
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| in_dreams |
Great production but I think itīs would do better as a Progressive Trancetune. Just my opinon.
Cheers:) |
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| daverodger |
thanks ol chap. i posted in your thread about the track.
el bump do mo ori bumpo |
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| daverodger |
| quote: | Originally posted by in_dreams
Great production but I think itīs would do better as a Progressive Trancetune. Just my opinon.
Cheers:) |
how would i steer it in that direction?? |
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| daverodger |
| quote: | Originally posted by ********
I hear this with DNB drums.. lot more break works in the begining.. and a lot more live... like I'd be getting some drum rolls in with the snare
at around the 3/4th mark it gets sorta ploddy.. more like a happy house tune than the earlier tone.. very upbeat..
so this is my take
early part get some really live snappy drum play in and the progression at the end isn't fitting
first half of the track has good instramental qualities. I find the choice of vocal sorta weird.
I'm not sure what you wrote this with. but if you'd like to colab I'm more then willing to do a remix of this track.
GOOD FOR A FIRST OFF FOR SURE |
so your saying ditch everything after the creaking door part??? or just change up the progression the pads are doing...and ditch the lead??
i was already thinking i'd ditch the lead part and do vox in there...maybe explain why i need to lock myself up ;)
what is it thats weird about the vocal line, rhythm, note choice, the timbre?
i was trying out some big wide toms in there and it wasnt workin out so great.
i'd love to hear what you could do with it. i could bounce out whatever parts you wants as aiff (or however u want em) and mail them to ya??? |
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