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Coldblack - Neptunian (sample 128 k)
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| coldblack |
A sample off another track that Ive done.
Ive gone wild on the bass and the kickdrum for this one. :whip:
Check it out and lemme hear your thoughts.
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| Sunclyder |
| Sorry but I don't understand your track :nervous: |
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| Andrew_L |
A quick warning, don't listen to this through headphones... Head in a vice is the only way I can put it :nervous:
I can't really think of anything to say about the track. Intresting for 20 seconds I guess, but just plain uncomfortable after that. |
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| Akia |
I like the effects, they create a scary atmosphere! But imo it miss a main melody that take you through. Some nice ideas! Keep working! :)
Takere!
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| coldblack |
@ Sunclyder
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@Andrew_L
Hmmm...Well, interesting feedback. But What do you mean by "plain uncomfortable"? Thing is, I did want this to go a bit harsh on the ears, but can you please elaborate? Thanks!
@Akia
Yup, I was looking to keep it dark sounding. Im not really looking to create dance friendly or uplifting/positive type trance...:D
The "main melody" starts just when the sample ends. Im just tweaking the track now.
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Thanks for your comments people. I do appreciate it.
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| Spliph |
i like your atmospheric kick sounds... to describe it like that...
i have some great ideas for some melodies though... still missing that part.... i guess in my tracks its the opposite, ha...
keep workin @ it, iim sure you were in a different planet creating this track...
cheers,
nico
p.s. maybe you can critique my ''outbound'' track?? ;) |
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| coldblack |
hehe thanks for checking it out. Yes, I was in a different planet when I made it. :tongue3
I re-EQd it and it sounds different now. I am also adding some samples and vox to it. I will share it with you all as soon as I make my myspace profile.
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| marcusk |
Hey,
Like that dark vibe you have going.
But at 0:20 seconds i wasn't too fond of this next sound. it just sounds to me like too much delay. maybe try using a triplet delay, or add some off beat sounds to not make it sound so loopy, unless that's what your going for.
But I think you've got something solid for the first 20 seconds though.
Peace. |
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| coldblack |
Thanks for checking it out dude!
I did want to add a certain feel of "heaviness" to it through bass and kicks.
Though the bass/kick patterns are quite simple really, I looked to create an atmosphere around the bassline/kicks through the cicada type sounds.
Thanks for your feedback again! :D |
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