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Twilit Dream (trance) [6min preview]
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| Josh_FIN |
Uplifting, melodic, nostalgic, dreamy, catchy trance music... ;) or is it?
Comments are very welcome
160 kbps mp3 - DOWNLOAD HERE |
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| richg101 |
nice kick man:)
bass is also very cool in sound - but doesnt have enough highs and mids imo. you have created a good drive. maybe some tougher percs here and there would assist that quite dirty bass in doing its job:)
also some parts where the percs cut in and out to add variety. like cut the kick for a few bars and re build up now and again.
break comes in nicely. - im not very keen on the synths and the melodies. not very original for some reason - but not generic either.... its hard to put my thumb on..
beat coming back - this works well but the fades could be done in a more effective way. better timing for better build:)
i think with some tweaking and a few fresher percs this could be very effective on the dancefloor
rich:) |
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| phyrrus |
| I would suggest a more complex melody. I'm hearing everything (arps, pads, bass) moving in the same direction at the same time, and I think it would make the track much more interesting if there was some dynamic to the melody. hope that made sense. |
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| Josh_FIN |
| quote: | Originally posted by richg101
nice kick man:)
bass is also very cool in sound - but doesnt have enough highs and mids imo. you have created a good drive. maybe some tougher percs here and there would assist that quite dirty bass in doing its job:)
also some parts where the percs cut in and out to add variety. like cut the kick for a few bars and re build up now and again.
break comes in nicely. - im not very keen on the synths and the melodies. not very original for some reason - but not generic either.... its hard to put my thumb on..
beat coming back - this works well but the fades could be done in a more effective way. better timing for better build:)
i think with some tweaking and a few fresher percs this could be very effective on the dancefloor
rich:) |
Richard, thanks for your feedback! :)
Yeah I know the build up needs some tweaking. And I think the whole track needs better mixing too. ;)
This is my first own production ever. The track is about 6 months old. I'll try to finish this later, but now I have some newer productions coming up. I'll post them here very soon.. ;)
| quote: | | I think it would make the track much more interesting if there was some dynamic to the melody. hope that made sense. |
Maybe I'll try that.. thanks ;)
-Johannes |
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