|
My Newest Track demo - [Trance]Forgotten Vision ... 3 min Sample .. 320Kbps
|
View this Thread in Original format
| avengie |
Hey Mates.....
I ve been doing this for the whole day so far... I need your Feedback on my progress.... The main melody is done... and only a bit effects and automation has to be done.... but now, its in a considerable good condition.... So i would loved to hear some comments even if its or good or whatever....
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.p...1AFAAB349DBC90E
Thanks in advance.... I will return the favor :D |
|
|
| Bidor |
hey mate reviewing as i listen..
cool arps in the beginning.. cool synthesized synths, very melodic. well done! :) beat is nice and clear.. the best part in the tune is the piano. maybe tune up the volume a little of the piano, it sounds a bit low. i think this tune has a lot of potential.. keep working on it! ;)
sorry i didnt reply earlier.. i just came from work:)
check you pm's! ;)
Bidor:) |
|
|
| Subtle |
Listening:
Nice drive, clear sounds. nice panned pitch sound.
waiting for the mainpart now.
Piano sounds very nice, but needs to be put more forward in the mix.
This sounds very good so far. the build up and mainpart remains now, to decide if this will become a great track or not. |
|
|
| richg101 |
nice sharp electronic synth.
the into is very energetic.
the percs work well in driving too.. but something is sounding muddy in the lows of the percs/bass...
pads. i like the notation and the way they work together. but the mix doesnt work. some synths want turning down, while others want turning up. and try making a few of them less wet with verb/delay- this might clear up the sound slightly.
overall i like this sound
rich:) |
|
|
|
|
