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[Tech/Trance] John Marks - Carnival (Exceed Remix) - [Full 256Kbps]
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Bidor
hey guys, after a week hard work on this remix i finally finished it:) its my second tune that i finished in fruity, and im quite happy with the result. hope to get some feedback as thats very hard to get lately on ta.. and guess what? i return feedback! :p

enjoy! :)

Title : John Marks - Carnival (Exceed Remix)
Kbps : 256
File Size : 8.4Mb
Lenght : 4:30



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Thanks!


Bidor:)
canadian didjer
hey hows it goin?

wooh! big kick... too much compression?
cool synths
there are soo many well placed dark effects in this one:eyespop: :crazy: :eyespop:

that bassline, on second listen sounds better

you may wanna work on your kick overpowering...

i'm liking the 3:13

anyway... uhm.... yeah cool track ;) loving the effects...
iloop
i don't think you did this intentionally but maybe turn down your master like halfway down before you render your track... right now everything sounds square.
Bidor
quote:
Originally posted by iloop
i don't think you did this intentionally but maybe turn down your master like halfway down before you render your track... right now everything sounds square.


thanks a lot guys for reviewing! im not sure what you mean with "Square".. but ill look into the rendering!



Bidor:)
Sunclyder
Siemaxik :)

Auaaa .... My ears .... :whip:

Please correct your mastering Now!!!

Greetings
Bidor
quote:
Originally posted by Sunclyder
Siemaxik :)

Auaaa .... My ears .... :whip:

Please correct your mastering Now!!!

Greetings


uhm yeah.. thanks for replying... ill have to master the tune when i will come home tonight.

Bidor:)
Frenchie
Well done. Needs some tweaking though. I loved the track selection, kept me moving!
Can't wait for the next one.
ASFSE
ya so...clipping like mad....
Bidor
quote:
Originally posted by Frenchie
Well done. Needs some tweaking though. I loved the track selection, kept me moving!
Can't wait for the next one.


thanks! :D
Gordy
deffinatley a mastering issue, i like the break downs and such, didnt really care of the start or end of the track though. keep up with the producing bro!

KAKAAKlol
Is this a joke? This is very awful. The reverse crashes dont go.. Synths doesn't fit the tune, sounds like you just picked a synth out of sytrus vst. Claps just noobish sounds like a 5 year old messing around with FL studio. There is no arrangement. To much volume on the samplers. Is this your first time in FL studio? Sounds like you tooked 5 mins on it.
Enigmatic XTC
definitely needs a lot of mastering work. its clipping everywhere. what did you use to create your other tracks?
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