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| Eldritch |
Hey, I've been working on this melody for the past few days. It's started to grow on me, but I'm not really sure if it's even good.
Is it worth making a track out of this? Or does it sound too weird?
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| System101 |
i like the chords..very nice pad..it flows nicely..the lead is good too but if it was my track i'd change up the lead a bit..it sounds nice though
cheers |
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| Eldritch |
| quote: | Originally posted by System101
i like the chords..very nice pad..it flows nicely..the lead is good too but if it was my track i'd change up the lead a bit..it sounds nice though
cheers |
Thanks. How do you mean? Melody wise or sound wise? Can you be more specific? |
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| System101 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Eldritch
Thanks. How do you mean? Melody wise or sound wise? Can you be more specific? |
maybe use 2 octives..randomize some of the notes a bit to give it that nice flow so everything doesn't follow the same notes..use a uniqe sound that people will remember the song by.. of curse these are just my suggestions..jsut some ideas you coud try out..
and a trick that i use that 95% of the times works:..
if you don't know how to use the black notes or if you want to move the song up or down a pitch higher try moving all the notes "3 notes" up or down..(count the black notes as well) it always surprises me how it changes the whole mood of the song..;)
i hope i helped a bit
cheers |
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| verdonsky |
This is incredible man, good job. Both the melody and sound is great. Dude, keep me posted.
oh, and i wouldn't change anything. |
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| G-Con |
thought it was great. might just want something at the very end of the melody. A note change that really pulls the emotional chord...hard to explain what i mean as i have no music theory whatsoever.
Really good though. would like you to pm me when this is done... |
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| BOOsTER |
| not bad at all! :) |
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| emc^2 |
i'm assuming it is Virus you're using? not bad! Like the chord progression and melody.
Great start, finish it! |
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| Seppa |
not bad !
I'd raise a few note here and there from minute 1.06 to 1.10
good start keep going...! |
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| Eldritch |
Thanks guys, I will definately make a track out of this. I'll keep your suggestions in mind.
| quote: | Originally posted by emc^2
i'm assuming it is Virus you're using? not bad! Like the chord progression and melody.
Great start, finish it! |
Actually, it's all Reason synths. |
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| thoughtlessjex |
| There's nothing all that weird about this melody. It's actually rather moving. Keep it up. |
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