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(classical/electronic) - jezper's interlude - j.r. garcia
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| R.j. |
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er, first half classic, and then, it goes into a slow, mellow electronic-type of song.
comments? anything?
oh and btw, i plan on inserting some 'real' choir samples when i get the chance... |
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| Akia |
Beautiful! This would fit great as filmmusic! But as in your other track I think the high notes are a little bit too high. Will probebly be amazing with a choirsample, keep it up! :)
Takere!
Akia |
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| B_man |
I'm with Akia with the treble frequencies, but I love symphonic stuff.
This hits the spot. Good brass chords from the beginning, but I think that it could have transitioned better instead of the brief moment of silence. Otherwise, the classical interludes are skillfully considered -- but you still should work on the transitions more. The trick, at least in my mind, is to make them subtle. I suppose it's just me, but the intro seemed to have almost three verses that mostly consisted of a chord structure with a melody that's difficult to follow.
When the plucked instrument and electronic beats start to fall into play, it sounds very uplifting. However, you need to tame the treble regions and make the track warmer.
NICE pad... I love washy, airy, angelic pads like that.
Concern: Some of the bells sounded a tad off-pitch.
It kind of makes me think of symphonic credits for a video game. Even the choir samples give it that kind of air. Very well done.
The conclussion could have been better thought out.
Good work overall, just little nitpicks aside. |
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| R.j. |
Thank you very much... I truly appreciate these comments.
And, you're both definitely right about the high notes... It's not the notes themselves, actually. It's the fact that I used the feedback effect a tad too much...
Anyhow, thanks again. |
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| cybernetica |
Sweet medieval atmosphere. I really dig it.
Arrangement is great.
Some upper midrange frequencies are definately too harsh, which hurts in the ears.
But I like the atmosphere. your songwriting is quite good.
Good luck with your productions! |
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