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John Marks - Carnival (Exceed's Updated Remix)
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| Bidor |
i updated the old version since it had a lot of mastering problems... plus i changed a variety of things like the bassline, more percs and fx's etc.. anyway would love to hear your opinion about it:)
Title : Carnival
Original Artist : John Marks
Remixed By : Exceed
Genre : Trance
Kbps : 224
File Length : 4:26
File Size : 7.12Mb
Speedyshare.com (Download Link Below)
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Thanks a million!
Bidor :) |
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| Akia |
Nice intro, I like the dark, mystic feeling! Maybe the sound is a bit muddy. The short vocal samples in the break are great! Good job so far! :)
Takere!
Akia |
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| cybernetica |
Hey Bidor,
This is a very dark track. Not a happy carnival this time? :P
I like the overall groove however things are very minimal. I think there could be more elements to fill up the mix. And the lead synth sounds kinda muffled, I think this could get spiced up a little.
Good luck, keep it up! |
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| Bidor |
| quote: | Originally posted by Akia
Nice intro, I like the dark, mystic feeling! Maybe the sound is a bit muddy. The short vocal samples in the break are great! Good job so far! :)
Takere!
Akia |
Thanks Akia!
i think with muddy you mean the track is trippy?!:p hehe glad you like it!
| quote: | Originally posted by cybernetica
Hey Bidor,
This is a very dark track. Not a happy carnival this time? :P
I like the overall groove however things are very minimal. I think there could be more elements to fill up the mix. And the lead synth sounds kinda muffled, I think this could get spiced up a little.
Good luck, keep it up! |
hey Cyber! hehe i dont actually know why the tune is so dark... its ssomething i came up with.. im eager to know as to what kind of elements you would like to hear in the tune. ill see what i can do on the lead synths.. thanks for the review,
btw im still waiting on a package from you!:p
hehe keep it real.
Bidor:) |
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| cybernetica |
I dont know what else could be inside, I guess more synths in the back would be nice, maybe some short stabs to support the groove ;)
anyway, check PM ;) |
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| Bidor |
| quote: | Originally posted by cybernetica
I dont know what else could be inside, I guess more synths in the back would be nice, maybe some short stabs to support the groove ;)
anyway, check PM ;) |
ill see what i can change.. thanks for the suggestion!:) |
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| AniG |
i agree with cybernetica, it feels like it could do with more in it lol. not a bad song tho, work a little more on your production skills and get everything sounding a lil more crisp.
if im not mistaken, im pretty sure i made the midi for john marks - carnival on nonstop2k.com lol |
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| Takkra |
| quote: | Originally posted by AniG
if im not mistaken, im pretty sure i made the midi for john marks - carnival on nonstop2k.com lol |
true hahaha.. and you made the notes wrong! :p |
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| Bidor |
| quote: | Originally posted by Takkra
true hahaha.. and you made the notes wrong! :p |
i got the original midi from "John Marks" himself, believe it or not.
btw i didnt even know about that site untill you posted it, thanks!:) |
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| [nxx] |
8) hi bidor! nice to see another track you did
[0.01] nice start bassline
[0.07] fx is cool there
[0.24] kicks in, nice distorted lead type there
[0.40] break, nice lead
[0.54] vocal is cool 8)
[0.58] kicks in, lead sounds nice
[1.25] kicks break, lead flows nicely
[1.45] kicks back, nice trippy percussions there
[2.15] nice flowing
[2.26] leads back. nice fx around there
[3.08] vocal
[3.13] kicks back
[3.28] trippy perc back
[3.52] nice fx there
[4.10] towards end, nice distorted type lead
[4.22] nice boom
[4.25] end
8) i really enjoyed listening. its real heavy.
theres alot going on. keep up the good work!
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| AniG |
| quote: | Originally posted by Takkra
true hahaha.. and you made the notes wrong! :p |
i know it was wrong, someone was supposed to edit it lol |
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